Articles | Volume 18, issue 10
https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-18-7319-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
A decade of monthly frontal ablation at 147 tidewater glaciers in Svalbard
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- Final revised paper (published on 06 Oct 2026)
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2026-273', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Jun 2026
- AC1: 'Revisions to reviewer 1's comments', Dakota Pyles, 28 Jul 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on essd-2026-273', Robert McNabb, 29 Jun 2026
- AC2: 'Revisions to reviewer 2's comments', Dakota Pyles, 28 Jul 2026
- AC1: 'Revisions to reviewer 1's comments', Dakota Pyles, 28 Jul 2026
- AC2: 'Revisions to reviewer 2's comments', Dakota Pyles, 28 Jul 2026
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EC1: 'Comment on essd-2026-273', Ken Mankoff, 28 Jul 2026
- AC3: 'Reply on EC1', Dakota Pyles, 24 Aug 2026
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AR by Dakota Pyles on behalf of the Authors (28 Aug 2026)
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ED: Publish as is (09 Sep 2026) by Ken Mankoff
AR by Dakota Pyles on behalf of the Authors (17 Sep 2026)
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In this manuscript, Pyles and co-authors present a dataset of frontal ablation at Svalbard's tidewater glaciers. The dataset is comprehensive and highly resolved, and I expect it to be of great value to the science community. The manuscript is well written, detailed, and clearly illustrated with high-quality figures. I commend the authors on an overall enjoyable and insightful read! I have some minor recommendations and questions that I hope will improve the manuscript:
General comment:
The tone of language is at points -- in particular in the abstract and introduction -- a bit informal/florid or leans toward editorializing. Examples of this are: "...the manual labor cost inherent to mapping..." (L14) - manual labor is not strictly speaking inherent to mapping, so I would just simplify this to "...the manual labor cost of mapping..."; "...from the extensive ITS_LIVE velocity database, ..." (L 15), change to "from the ITS_LIVE velocity database, ..."; "unprecedented" (L19, L61) - I would just remove the word or replace with "high"; "is strongly recommended" (L 40) - reword?; I also recommend following the general guideline of avoiding the terms "novel" or "new" (the science should speak for itself, L 12 and 62). I would encourage the authors to go over the full text with this in mind.
Specific comments:
L 44: the statement on "decadal timescales" appears in conflict with the L 48 statement on annual/seasonal resolution by Minowa et al and Fahrner et al - rephrase?
L 64: Could you clarify why you are not using the Li et al (2024) frontal positions for this study?
Fig 2: While this figure is visually striking, I found it a little hard to interpret. I was trying to figure out which elements were schematic illustrations of the quantities used in the dataset, and which were artist's rendering/ aesthestic additions. I would urge the authors to simplify this and only include what is needed to make sense of the dataset/ processing chain.
L 165: Could you clarify in the main text what the OpenStreetMap is used for?
Fig 3: I found the overall layout of this Figure, with the different insets and zoom-ins somewhat confusing and was wondering whether it could be laid out slightly differently, or maybe panel a should be made its own figure?
L 261: Is the smoothing of the polygon boundaries necessary beyond an aesthetic improvement? Would it be worthwhile to also provide the unsmoothed polygons in the dataset?
L 340-375: I struggled a little to follow this argument; would it be worth adding a schematic to illustrate this process, or adjust Fig 7 to help with this?
L 386: It wasn't quite clear to me here whether you are using the Fuerst et al data or method here - could you please clarify?
L 423: How do you handle days without a velocity measurement?
L 460: Could you provide a short justification for using this reduced density of ice?
L 556: Are all the study polygons located in the ablation zone, in which case a negative CMB would be expected? Could you please comment on this?
L 571: The increase in tidewater termini length: might improved data coverage/quality over time contribute to this increase in the termini length? (Part of my question here is because I thought it a surprising finding - I would expect shortening of the termini as they retreat more onto land?)
Wording/Typos/Grammar etc:
L 27: "the ice-water-air interface" - these are actually (3) different interfaces; rephrase?
L 34: "total mass loss" -> "total ice loss" ?
L 80/89: The two sentences on diverse geometries feel repetitive and could be tightened?
L 129/134 and elsewhere: I was a little confused by the use of "inference" vs "prediction"? Are these terms referring to the same thing? If so, I would just use one of them, if not, maybe the difference could be clarified?
L 140: It may be worth spelling out "Randolph Glacier Inventory (RGI)" here, not just in the Fig 1 caption?
L 176: reword: "...the segmentation model, which is pre-trained ..." (?)
L 177: what do you mean by "unseen domain" ?
L 234: "consensus" seems maybe the wrong term?
L 304: "Like the cross-sectional area definition, ..." -> I struggled to make sense of this wording - could be clarified?
L 305: "We assume no uncertainty in the widths ..." -> rephrase: "We assume the uncertainty in the widths is small ..." (?)
Fig 6a: Is the map inset needed here, since you have the same inset in panel b?
L 487: "m^3 W.E. (Fig. 8)" -> the figure legend gives the total mass in Gt rather than the volume in "m^3 W.E." - could this be made consistent or clarified?
L 606: unit of Gt a^-1 (100 km)^-1 - as on L 608
L 655: remove "heavily" ?
L 663: reword: "mass loss due to frontal ablation *has* rapidly *increased* since 2000 ..."
L 696: "both *study* results"
L 701: These values should be negative, to be consistent?
L 734: "...and *its* implications..."