Articles | Volume 15, issue 11
https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-15-5017-2023
© Author(s) 2023. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
High-resolution emission inventory of full-volatility organic compounds from cooking in China during 2015–2021
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- Final revised paper (published on 16 Nov 2023)
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2023-278', Anonymous Referee #1, 31 Aug 2023
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Zeqi Li, 26 Sep 2023
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- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Zeqi Li, 26 Sep 2023
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ED: Publish as is (30 Sep 2023) by Yuqiang Zhang
AR by Zeqi Li on behalf of the Authors (06 Oct 2023)
The manuscript has systematically developed the China cooking emission inventory of organic compounds over the full volatility range, filling a major gap in anthropogenic emission inventories. Based on the multi-dimensional inventory, the authors analyzed the characteristics, trends, and driving factors of cooking emissions.
The authors have obviously done lots of work and have provided a wealth of valuable data including detail emission factors and high-resolution emissions. The manuscript is well-written and the results are well-explained, with uncertainties properly discussed. The findings and dataset are unique and valuable for the academic community, and therefore deserve publication in ESSD. However, there are some minor issues that need to be clarified and resolved. I recommend the publication of the manuscript after a minor revision.
1. The authors should give more information about Chinese cooking to make the manuscript more understandable and appealing to global readers. The unique characteristics of Chinese cooking, especially the differences from the cooking of other countries, should be pointed out in the introduction section to show why they are worth considering. The complexity of the cuisines and the variety of compounds mentioned so far (Line 57-59) do not seem to adequately characterize the uniqueness of Chinese cooking. In the methodology section, when discussing the classification of cuisines (Line 167-170), the reasons for such a categorization also need to be detailed, and a brief description of the characteristics of each cuisines category should be included in the main text to make it comprehensible to readers who are unfamiliar with the characteristics of Chinese cuisine.
2. Line 165-167: The cuisine categorization seems to be a complex process, so the R code mentioned here needs to be provided for better reproduction of results and its potential application in data processing for other regions.
3. Line 272-273: The authors need to provide a clearer description of the collection of "key policy milestones and implementation transition periods". For example, where to find comprehensive policy documents and how they relate to the control of cooking sources.
4. Line 456-458: The spatial distribution of emissions by sector needs to be given in the supplement and briefly analyzed.
5. Lastly, since this paper contains a very large number of methods and data, adding a summary figure that includes the calculated data and results will help the reader to quickly spot the major methodologies and the significant values of the emission inventory.
6. Line 134: The full volatility range should cover the range of saturation vapor concentrations <10-2 and >107, as indicated in Table 2, which is not expressed accurately enough here.
7. Line 60: "to quantify" instead of "to quantifying".