General comments:

This manuscript presents an important update to a widely used global dataset of agricultural lands (including both cropland and pasture) for circa 2015. As a researcher working in this space, I can confidently say that these data are needed and will be widely used. As an anecdote, I have interacted with many researchers in the academic, NGO, and private space that still use the original data (circa 2000) in their analyses, as no other datasets exist that are global, comprehensive in both crop and pasture percent area, and are served at a resolution readily useable for global models and other land use and ghg accounting metrics.

This manuscript is being submitted in 2024 for maps that reflect 2015 and by the time of publication may be 10 years out of date. While it would be great to have something more updated, this delay is likely a reflection of the time it takes to receive and process census and survey data, create and document reproducible code, make comparisons with other global maps, and the general nature of academic data production. While other higher-resolution and more updated datasets have come out and will continue to come out, these 2015 data will remain very useful for the reasons stated above. Furthermore, future updates could be faster as the authors seem to have taken great care to create a reproducible pipeline for updating future versions of the maps, which is a great service to the community and will ensure reproducibility, trust, uptake, and longevity.

The methods used in the map production are tested and sound, as far as I’m aware. The bias-correction steps and post-processing methods, including pycnophylactic interpolation, seem appropriate. Because the data production pipeline is open, others can assess the impact that these steps have on the final product. The authors have made the proper statements about the appropriate use of the data (“…these data are intended for use in global modeling studies… This update is for users that require global data that covers comprehensive cropland and pasture definitions and is numerically consistent between land use estimates”). There are possibly some idiosyncrasies and missing areas in the maps, which I mention below. I make one suggestion to either adjust the latitude/GDD mask for pastures to better reflect reality or at least to document the extent of those missing areas when comparing to HYDE and HILDA+.

I am not an expert in the validation of geospatial data products so I would defer to other reviewers on this topic. I understand that the modern best practice involves an independent visual inspection, but it also seems to me that it would be extremely challenging (or not possible?) to do that on a percent area product at this resolution.

Overall, the manuscript and accompanying maps and code represent a valuable contribution to the field of global agricultural mapping.

Specific Comments

• I’m glad that the data production pipeline supports the production of maps that are not aligned to FAOStat, given some of the known inaccuracies. Will those maps receive a separate peer-reviewed publication? If not, I would encourage the authors to consider presenting them here in the supplemental material. I believe these maps would be valuable but far less used if not peer-reviewed. It doesn’t seem like it would have to add much length to the manuscript text if the production is just a branch of the current pipeline. I should clarify that this comment is more of a personal recommendation that I think would strengthen the paper and make the non-FAO matched product more useable. I don’t think it should be taken as a pre-condition for publication as the current version does stand on its own.
• It would be useful to define what is a pasture or cropland area for this map as well as some heuristics about what we should expect to find in these areas. Are you adopting the FAO definitions of arable land and permanent meadows and pastures and calling it cropland and pasture? Is there a defined allowable fallow period to be considered cropland? Having an explicit definition will make it easier for others to understand if this map is suitable for their use case and also help to “map” the differences between this product and others. If the definition is in the old paper I think it’s worth repeating.
• The Northern latitude or GDD mask may be too strict (I think more for pastures than croplands) as it seems to be masking out some areas that should be considered agriculture such as the UK and Northern Ireland, Fennoscandia, and Iceland. You could compare to results here (https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10980-024-01810-6) or here (https://link.springer.com/article/10.1038/s41598-022-20095-w?fromPaywallRec=false). Additionally, in Figure 5 it looks like the latitude/GDD mask was applied to HYDE and HILDA as well before making the comparison but it would be useful to see how much pasture area was included in those datasets that’s excluded from this one. I would recommend either reconsidering these constraints or at least quantifying the impact by showing how much area is left out compared to other products when this constraint is applied.
• Starting on line 240 it’s confusing to understand how you’re treating Australia and why. For example, you mention masking grazing in the cropland maps but how are the Australian grazing areas defined? Maybe it’s the Abares reference but you only mention pasture and not grazing as a term when you describe it. It would be nice to give some additional details and justifications for why an aridity mask is only used in Australia. Perhaps a summary of the points made in the original paper would help this section flow better and stand alone.
• Line 270. You could consider adding some additional data on top of Geo-wiki or Potopov to cover some of the missing perennial crops. See here for potential data sources (https://www.wri.org/research/spatial-database-planted-trees-sdpt-version-2).

Technical corrections

• Line 210 – I was unfamiliar with the term “stride” but if it’s commonly understood there is no need to change it.
• Figure 3. I think the axes should have units of percent
• 271 – Geo-Wiki is hyphenated
• 290 – I think there must be a typo here and it’s actually 2012-2015 and 2016-2019.
• 340 – Table 2 caption should read “… area estimates”

All the best to the authors for their hard work on this,

Lindsey Sloat

The authors present an updated version of a global layer of cropland and pastureland for the reference year 2015. They are correct in pointing out that there are few datasets providing information about agricultural uses, especially pastures, at global or continental scales. This explains the widespread use of the previous dataset produced by the authors and fully justifies the relevance of the data presented in this work.

With that said, I believe this contribution is highly relevant and useful. I am not a technical expert and have no prior experience with most of the methods employed by the authors. Therefore, I cannot provide meaningful comments regarding the specific methodology used to produce the dataset and, consequently, its quality. I would recommend that the editor consult expert reviewers on the technical aspects of the paper to gain further insight on this point.

Regarding the dataset’s usability, I found it very helpful, and I appreciate the authors' comments about the specific purposes for which the dataset should be used, as well as its limitations. I would recommend that the authors elaborate on these points in greater depth, providing a dedicated section in the paper to outline the dataset’s limitations, uncertainties, and the extent and contexts in which it should be used. In this regard, I would reiterate the authors’ warning at the beginning of the paper about the potential temptation to compare this dataset with the one previously produced for the reference year 2000. Some information on what cropland and pastureland means in the paper and how this definition fits in the different parts of the world would be also appreciated.

Finally, I also suggest that the authors improve the paper’s readability and structure. I believe the paper would benefit from a few changes that could better highlight the authors' work. For example, the methods section could be explained in a more detailed, step-by-step manner, making it easier for users to replicate the workflow followed by the authors.

In addition, the paper needs of some lenguage revision to avoid small mistakes (e.g. page 2, line 65)

Below are a few specific comments:

Page 3, Section 2

It would be beneficial to clearly outline the different steps of the methodology at the beginning of Section 2 (pipeline overview), providing a brief explanation of each step and then directing the reader to the sections where each part of the methodology is explained in more detail.

Additionally, for clarity, I recommend that the authors include subsections within Section 2 for each part of the methodological process.

Page 4

Separating Figure 1A and Figure 1B into two distinct figures, each with its own caption, would enhance clarity in this part of the paper.

Page 5, Section 3.1

Starting from line 100, the authors should work on a clearer presentation of the information. You searched for subnational statistics across various countries, obtaining different results (no data, data but not the required data, available data). I recommend clearly explaining which countries fall into each category, and referring readers to Table A1 for those countries where useful information was found. Including all countries in Table A1 seems unnecessary, as it adds noise to the information presented in the table.

Page 5, Line 102

The second part of the text in brackets should be placed outside the brackets, as it provides important clarifying information.

Page 6, Line 120

The last line of the paragraph can be removed, as it does not add meaningful information.

Page 6, Line 128

This appreciation for the South Arabian datasets is relevant and should be moved to Section 3.1.

Page 6, Section 3.3

I recommend that the authors move all relevant pre-processing steps related to input data to the sections where these datasets are introduced and explained. You may not need to explain every detail of the pre-processing workflow in the main text, but simply refer to the main steps and provide a detailed description of all pre-processing in an appendix or supplementary material.

In general, I found it challenging to follow the entire pre-processing workflow. I think the authors should work on improving this section's readability, making each step taken very clear so that other users can replicate the workflow.

Page 10, Line 213

The last line of the paragraph can be removed.

Page 21

Most of the links included in Table A1 are not working.

References

I would suggest to the authors two references of the same contribution that may be relevant for the work, as they provide a review of land cover datasets avilable at global scale and specifically mapping agricultural cover:

• García-Álvarez, D., & Nanu, S. F. (2022). Land use cover datasets: a review. Land Use Cover Datasets and Validation Tools, 47.
• García-Álvarez, D., & Lara Hinojosa, J. (2022). Global Thematic Land Use Cover Datasets Characterizing Agricultural Covers. In Land Use Cover Datasets and Validation Tools: Validation Practices with QGIS (pp. 399-417). Cham: Springer International Publishing.