Articles | Volume 16, issue 10
https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-16-4557-2024
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Crop-specific management history of phosphorus fertilizer input (CMH-P) in the croplands of the United States: reconciliation of top-down and bottom-up data sources
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2024-67', Anonymous Referee #1, 07 Jun 2024
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ED: Publish as is (21 Aug 2024) by Hao Shi
AR by Peiyu Cao on behalf of the Authors (22 Aug 2024)
This study claims to provide a high resolution (4km by 4km) dataset of phosphorus inputs, timing and application methods for the USA using interpolation methods and existing datasets at the county and state level from 1850 to 2022. They make an admirable attempt at doing this and could provide an important dataset for those interested in nutrient balances for this country. However I believe the uncertainties could be better explained in the discussion esp. related to areas not fertilized, and temporal variability in uncertainties given this is such a long term dataset taking data from multiple sources. Below I note some areas of their manuscript which could be elaborated on further to help the reader understand the uncertainty and accuracy of their estimates.
I believe the 4*4 km resolution the authors state gives a false sense of accuracy considering data at the state and county level are used for their estimates. Isn’t the accuracy of their estimates determined by their lowest resolution data (i.e. at the state level)? Given the methods employed by the authors I believe it is quite a stretch to say it has 4*4km resolution. More discussion should be made on this point, and perhaps the authors should refer to their study actually offering ‘pseudo 4*4 km resolution’ with state level accuracy. This would better indicate to users the uncertainty in their estimates and that really the accuracy is at the state level.
Lines 93-96. Please include in discussion, likely uncertainties in P consumption temporally. I assume there will be more uncertainty in the historic estimates from the 1800’s than the latter surveys?
Line 142. Where did you get data for the fertilized cropland percentage. Please add this to the method.
Line 148. How did you account for areas of wheat not fertilized?
Line 156-157. Again how did you account for areas of other crops that received no fertilizer at all?
Line 186. You claim in your abstract that 40% of cropland has remained unfertilized in the last decade, but on line 186 you suggest you do not have spatial information to locate fertilized area. So how do you know the same 40% area has been left unfertilized? Based on line 186 it seems like you are showing average application rates across all area and not accounting for non-fertilized areas. Lines 195 onward you mention USDA-ERS data for % cropland fertilized, but how did you get % area fertilized before the USDA-ERS data before 1996?
Line 319: Can you explain the brief decline in 1980’s. Was there policy changes or a shock to the supply/demand for P that aligns to your estimates? This would be a nice way to cross check your estimates to make sure they make sense in terms of trends
Section 4.3. Discussion should be made about how uncertainty in areas not fertilized could influence average fertilizer rates.