Articles | Volume 15, issue 6
https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-15-2533-2023
© Author(s) 2023. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
The UKSCAPE-G2G river flow and soil moisture datasets: Grid-to-Grid model estimates for the UK for historical and potential future climates
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- Final revised paper (published on 21 Jun 2023)
- Preprint (discussion started on 26 Jan 2023)
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2022-439', Anonymous Referee #1, 10 Mar 2023
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Alison Kay, 18 Apr 2023
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RC2: 'Comment on essd-2022-439', Anonymous Referee #2, 04 Apr 2023
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Alison Kay, 18 Apr 2023
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This data paper serves as a nice bringing together of a variety of existing, but closely related datasets around the G2G national modelling. I find that having all of these details together in one place will be useful for a wide variety of UK-based research and modelling. I have tested all data links for the datasets presented and they currently work (2023-03-10). I have found the paper to be well written with only some minor comments below.
I would note that I have selected good rather than excellent for originality and uniqueness because this paper is bringing together existing data rather than presenting new data. Though as above, I think this is still useful to bring these datasets under the same lens.
Minor comments:
I haven't reviewed an ESS data paper before, but it seems odd to me to have what appears to be acknowledgements as the first paragraph of an introduction. Maybe for this paper format it is fine.
L98 - The authors may wish to note that the HadUK data used provides all the necessary variables to calculate PE if users require a higher resolution representation of PE. I understand that the intention of this data paper is to draw reader's attention to the soil moisture and flow datasets produced, but I think this addition would be useful.
L109 - I am missing some mention about why the convection permitting simulations weren't used. It seems this would overcome some of the steps needed in S2.3 and be more accurate in general. At least readers should be made aware of its existence.
Figure 2 - the only lake cells I can identify are the 2 Northern Irish lakes. Are we supposed to be able to spot more? If so they will need more highlighting - or more explicit linking to the text about how the lakes are mainly significant in NI. Otherwise I'm not quite sure the point of Fig 2.
L238 - I think this paragraph can be written more clearly. Maybe it should start with "For the historical portion of the RCM PPE projections,.. "? But if so, it seems to overlap with the use of 'baseline periods' in the following paragraph (startin L251). I'm still a bit confused by it.
L267 - If my passing understanding of w@h and UKCP18 is correct (which it may not be), these two datasets can result in different (significantly different?) distributions of (e.g.,) precipitation, particularly at extremes. If this is true, it should be mentioned here. If there is no study that has made this comparison, then that is important information too.
Section 3.3 - It seems that the AMIN/AMAX soil moisture figure is missing here. It may not be such a conventionally studied metric but I feel is important to highlight the extremes.
L416 - The authors may find it helpful to cite Schwalm et al. (2020) for this statement and thus support their choice of rcp8.5. Also if I remember rightly there is only RCP8.5 for the UKCP18 regional projections anyway, which may also be worth mentioning and further justifies the use of this RCP.
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L40 & L215 - hyperlinks don't seem to work
L324 - 'highly statistically significant increase' -> 'statistically significant increase'
References:
Schwalm, Christopher R., Spencer Glendon, and Philip B. Duffy. "RCP8. 5 tracks cumulative CO2 emissions." Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences 117.33 (2020): 19656-19657.