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Australia’s terrestrial industrial footprint and ecological intactness
Abstract. Australia's unique biodiversity faces significant threats from anthropogenic activities that drive habitat destruction and degradation. This study presents the first comprehensive national-scale cumulative pressure map for terrestrial Australia since the 1980s, providing key insights into human disturbance of the landscape. We developed a Human Industrial Footprint (HIF) index incorporating 16 nationally relevant pressure layers, offering a more accurate representation of industrial influences than previous global-scale analyses. The HIF was used to derive an Ecological Intactness Index (EII), accounting for habitat quality, fragmentation, and connectivity. A technical validation comparing visually scored pressures in 1397 stratified random samples using high-resolution satellite images revealed a strong agreement with the HIF. We also conducted an uncertainty (sensitivity) analysis by adjusting individual pressure scores by up to ±50 % across 100,000 simulations, which showed a moderate impact on cumulative pressure scores, confirming the robustness of our approach. We believe these high-resolution datasets can be valuable tools for guiding conservation efforts, such as informing protected area expansion, ecosystem restoration priorities, and biodiversity offset strategies. By offering a detailed assessment of cumulative pressures and ecological integrity, this study addresses a critical knowledge gap, and can support evidence-based decision-making for Australia's biodiversity conservation and sustainable development objectives. The HIF, EII, and scaled pressure layers are available at 10.5281/zenodo.15833395 (Venegas-Li et al., 2025).
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This paper aims to develop the first national-specific human industrial footprint for terrestrial Australia. However, I struggle to understand the rationale behind this work. The production merely summarizes various pressure layers based on subjective scoring, how can the author claim it is 'accurate' or not? Additionally, it lacks practical significance for both biodiversity and ecology, as the article fails to demonstrate this through analysis or discussion. Therefore, I recommend rejecting this paper. Before submitting it elsewhere, the author(s) should reconsider the novelty and practicality of their work and extensively revise the manuscript.
Introduction
- What are the drawbacks of the existing global-scale data? What academic contributions can be achieved by addressing these drawbacks, such as improving biodiversity prediction?
- How do you define ‘pressure’? What is the relationship between different pressures and biodiversity? The authors should reconsider the correlation between the Human Impact Factor (HIF) and biodiversity.
- The industrial footprint may be misleading, as I would expect to see some analysis on the trade-induced impacts of industrial sectors on biodiversity, commonly referred to as the ‘footprint.’
Methods
- Do you believe your data layers can represent all pressures on biodiversity or ecology? Additionally, since the intensity of human activity can be represented by many proxies, why do you only consider population density while neglecting others, such as nighttime light?
- The temporal inconsistency of data layers may introduce significant bias.
- How do you determine the score and spatial scale for all the indirect impacts?
- Why do you assign the pressure of a dam to the focal pixel rather than its downstream effects?
- What does ‘HFI’ in line 272 refer to? It appears to be an abbreviation error.
- The single score for cropland seems insufficient to represent the pressure on biodiversity, as there are distinct differences under various intensification levels, land-use strategies, and biochemical conditions.
Results
- What is the ecological significance of the HIF value? I suspect that pixels with the same cumulative HIF value may experience different levels of pressure on ecology or biodiversity. Additionally, can I assert that a pixel with an HIF value of 40.0 experiences double the pressure of a pixel with an HIF value of 20.0?
- There is a numerical inconsistency regarding the R² value in line 333 and figure 2. Why did you use R², which typically measures goodness of fit, instead of Pearson’s r?
- I noticed a higher bias in regions with a high footprint. Why is that?
- The validation was based on subjective scoring, which is insufficient to support the reliability of the data.
- How can you claim that your production is more accurate solely based on low correlation with existing global-scale data? Furthermore, how do you define the accuracy of your work?
- What is the purpose of calculating the Ecological Impact Index (EII)? It does not seem to indicate any practical significance of your findings.
Discussion
- Please expand on the novelty, results, practical implications, and potential applications of your work.
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RC3: 'Comment on essd-2025-393', Anonymous Referee #3, 02 Sep 2025
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Based on 16 pressure layers of national relevance, the authors have developed the Human Industrial Footprint (HIF) and Ecological Intactness Index (EII) with high spatial resolution for Australia. These two indices are of critical significance for guiding vegetation restoration initiatives and biodiversity conservation practices. Overall, the manuscript is well-structured, with clear logical flow and coherent writing. To further enhance its academic rigor and contribution, the following suggestions are proposed for potential revisions:
1. Introduction (Lines 54–60): The current paragraph places excessive emphasis on the detailed background of the Global Biodiversity Framework (GBF). Given the focus of this study, an in-depth elaboration of the GBF is unnecessary and may divert attention from the core research context. Instead, the authors should systematically synthesize and present global advancements in pressure mapping research—a key foundation for justifying the novelty of this study. For instance, studies such as Gassert et al. (2023) and Arias-Patino et al. (2024) should be integrated to clarify research gaps that the current HIF and EII aim to address.2. Methods: While the Discussion section addresses uncertainties associated with data sources and methodological design, an important uncertainty remains unaccounted for: the influence of fire regimes. As a dominant disturbance in Australian ecosystems, fire exerts profound effects on both vegetation dynamics and intensive land use. For example, forestry operations across different regions exhibit varying levels of fire resistance, which may lead to divergent HIF/EII values even for the same ecosystem. The authors are advised to discuss whether fire regime variables were incorporated into the index development framework; if not, an additional analysis of fire-induced uncertainty should be added to strengthen the robustness of the methods.
3. Section 3.3 (Lines 365–370): The comparison between the proposed HIF/EII and existing Global Human Footprint datasets is currently insufficiently detailed. To fully demonstrate the advantages and limitations of the new indices, the authors should expand this section to include spatial comparative analyses by visualizing spatial patterns of discrepancies (e.g., via difference maps) to identify regions where the new indices diverge most significantly from global datasets.
4. The current Discussion section functions more as a Conclusion, as it primarily summarizes key findings rather than engaging in critical, in-depth synthesis.
5. The Discussion section can explicitly outline targeted application scenarios for the two indices to enhance their relevance for policymakers and practitioners. For example: compare the suitability of HIF and EII for specific management objectives (e.g., Is HIF more effective for evaluating industrial disturbance risks, while EII better captures ecological integrity for biodiversity hotspots?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2025-393-RC3
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Review of essd-2025-393
General comments
Overall, this paper is well written and organized, and provides a valuable contribution for efforts to conserve biodiversity in Australia. More generally, discussing and working through a few aspects described below would strengthen this paper.
This approach is relevant to reporting on the Global Biodiversity Framework, as the authors point out. As a result, the alignment of the “pressures” with the stressor/threat taxonomy (https://www.iucnredlist.org/resources/threat-classification-scheme) should be clarified. This may be a semantic difference between the definition of a “pressure” vs. a stressor/threat – is this considered the same as a stressor/threat in the framework? There are 16 pressures mapped here (and in previous datasets fewer). What is the rationale for including these pressures, and not others? Is it lack of data or relevancy? What happens when additional datasets are discovered or created – are they included within an existing pressure or not? E.g,. why are major roads and minor roads a single pressure, when trails and railroads are distinct from roads (and from each other). Please clarify the relationship of the pressures to the stressors framework.
The arbitrary but explicit scoring of impact strength associated with each pressure is described (e.g., a value of 10 for built-up lands) and addressed briefly in the limitations/caveats section. But, work on mapping human pressures generally, particularly in the context of national (or smaller regional, local applications) as described here, would benefit from a more data-driven approach/method to develop the scores. There are many papers that have used the general scoring scheme that this work builds on, but national-level mapping provides an opportunity to further improve how these scores are estimated or assigned – at least mentioned in the limitations section. In particular, methods from decision science that can elicit expert information in more careful, robust ways. In addition, the mapping approach described here would be strengthened by briefly discussing other work on mapping human pressures – at global and national scales (more specifics below).
While human pressure mapping is often used as a surrogate and is clearly a practical approach to provide critical information for informing conservation, it would be valuable to briefly distinguish the difference with ecologic (or habitat) condition, and what the assumptions are and to what situations this applies, e.g., high pressure corresponds to habitat degradation.
Specific comments
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Robinson, T. P., Wint, G. W., Conchedda, G., Van Boeckel, T. P., Ercoli, V., Palamara, E., and Gilbert, M.: Mapping the global distribution of livestock, PloS one, 9, e96084, https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0096084, 2014.
Nelson, A., Weiss, D.J., van Etten, J., Cattaneo, A., McMenomy, T.S. and Koo, J., 2019. A suite of global accessibility indicators. Scientific data, 6(1), p.266.
Weiss, D.J., Nelson, A., Vargas-Ruiz, C.A., Gligorić, K., Bavadekar, S., Gabrilovich, E., Bertozzi-Villa, A., Rozier, J., Gibson, H.S., Shekel, T. and Kamath, C., 2020. Global maps of travel time to healthcare facilities. Nature medicine, 26(12), pp.1835-1838.
Rytwinski, T. and Fahrig, L., 2015. The impacts of roads and traffic on terrestrial animal populations. Handbook of road ecology, pp.237-246.
Brennan, A., Naidoo, R., Greenstreet, L., Mehrabi, Z., Ramankutty, N. and Kremen, C., 2022. Functional connectivity of the world’s protected areas. Science, 376(6597), pp.1101-1104.
Technical corrections
L58: “Australis” spelling
L64: “gazettal” – is this a typo or an uncommon word?
L145: Microsoft (2022) ?? isn’t it Microsoft 2018?.
L162: WorldPop is at 10 m resolution (or area of 100 m2)? I think you mean 100 m (10000 m2)
L442: Great to see these limitations, caveats.
SI2: is the ABARES dataset the same as CLUMP (in the paper)?
Datasets
Built-up - in an ad hoc viewing of the data layer, this data seems this covers a broad range of intensity. Also, consider aligning the file names for the pressures with the description in the text (e.g., 01_builtup = 2.2.1 Intensive land uses. E.g., the town of Lithgow (150.1527, -33.4815) and just north near Marrangaroo (150.11423, -33.44008) is a much lower intensity area (dominated by forest/shrub). It would be valuable to examine this more systematically to this occurs elsewhere, and address this perhaps by describing the range of land use intensity (perhaps better would be using built-up as a value that ranges from 1 to 10 rather than just 10 or 0, such as is done with human population – but not suggesting that this has to be re-done). Numerous small (5-25 pixels) areas in very rural areas (albeit farmsteads/ranches) occur as well. These seem to be categorically different from high-density residential/commercial in cities. Similarly, there is a fair amount of speckling (single/couple pixels with 0 values) in high density areas e.g., (151.2506, -33.91478). This might be related to the conversion of the polygonal CLUMP data to raster (the details of this are needed).
Farm ponds and reservoirs
Amazing to see the number of farm ponds! The buffering of the ponds (500 m?) resulting in ~118 pixels seems disproportionate to the un-buffered reservoirs, which presumably have a larger impact in general than farm ponds. For example, at 118.61132, -31.97881 the footprint of the ponds covers ~50% of the land, while many (most?) reservoirs are smaller than a single pixel, and represented by 5 pixels (except for very large reservoirs, eg. >100 pixels. The result seems counter-intuitive, while the intensity value of 8 vs. 5 is higher, the impact is much greater on farms ponds… so 118 x 5=590 vs 5 x 9=40. Please clarify.
Roads
If two datasets are used to represent the roads, can the same road be represented in both datasets if they don’t align spatially, are they double-counted? In a quick look, it didn’t appear that there were any, but would be valuable to describe how this was handled. Also, what were the attributes and values used to distinguish major from minor roads and trails?
Cumulative map
Seems there are counter-intuitive results, e.g., 141.125431, -17.840316 where a major road (National Highway 1) has nearly half the cumulative value (~10.4) than a nearby powerline (18.7). Another example is a series of lower values in the middle of a major road (value of 8, correct) compared to adjacent areas (e.g., 145.69361, -34.08512) vs. adjacent to the road with a value of 15 (because of other pressures, in this example cropland). Are these caused by the summation of the pressures or something else?
EII – more detail – even just a sentence or two of how you calculated EII would be valuable. For example, what is the normalization of HIF to 0-1, what was the radius, shape of the kernel used for EII, so that reader doesn’t have to go to the Beyer et al. paper for pertinent parameters.