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Climatology of aerosol component concentrations derived from multi-angular polarimetric POLDER-3 observations using GRASP algorithm
Yevgeny Derimian
Cheng Chen
Xindan Zhang
Gregory L. Schuster
David Fuertes
Pavel Litvinov
Tatyana Lapyonok
Anton Lopatin
Christian Matar
Fabrice Ducos
Yana Karol
Benjamin Torres
Ke Gui
Yu Zheng
Yuanxin Liang
Yadong Lei
Jibiao Zhu
Lei Zhang
Junting Zhong
Xiaoye Zhang
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- Final revised paper (published on 29 Jul 2022)
- Supplement to the final revised paper
- Preprint (discussion started on 01 Apr 2022)
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2022-108', Anonymous Referee #1, 02 May 2022
This study presents the climatology of aerosol mass burden for different components based on a newly developed algorithm GRASP/Component with the input of POLDER-3 multi-channal radiance observations. Global observations of aerosol component concentration are crucial for both the estimation of aerosol effective radiative forcing from satellite observations and also the evaluation of the performance of global aerosol models, but retrieving those information from satellite has been challenging. Most of previous studies just used the column aerosol optical properties (e.g., AOD/AODf/AI) to estimate aerosol forcings, it seems somewhat rough but is the only feasible option. The dataset presented here is thus very valuable and useful for our scientific community. This manuscript is well organized, the analysis methods are technically sound. I personally think this manuscript is suitable for publication after a minor revision.
Detail comments:
Figures showing annual mean concentrations of different aerosol components (2005 - 2013) are quite interesting, but not much mentioned in the main text. Many recent studied revealed the aerosol effective forcing changed during last two decades due to the change in anthropogenic emissions (https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2022-295; https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-12-1649-2020). I feel that it could be quite interesting to plot the loong-trem trends of different aerosol components over main industrial regions (West Europe, East U.S., China and India) and discuss the potential implication or linkage to the observed radiative forcing trend.
Line 281: How can the authors conclude ‘the GRASP/Component provided the overall most consistent both total and detailed aerosol properties’ based on the findings by Zhang et al. (2021)? I don't understand the causal link. Could the authors develop a bit on this?
Figure 2: I guess STD here is calculated from daily data? Anyway, it is better to specify how the authors do the calculation.
Also, in my opinion, the manuscript would benefit from editing help from someone with full professional proficiency in English.
Minor correctons:
Lines 24: an intermediate retrievals ->intermediate retrievals
Line 30: ‘concentration’ →’concentrations’
Line 32: ‘aerosol’ →’aerosols’
Line 45: the full name of IPCC is needed when first mentioned.
Line 58: ‘the importance of having sufficient spectral resolution of measurements to capture the differences ’ → ‘the importance of sufficient spectral resolution of measurements on capturing the differences ’
Line 85: I feel that ‘and sometimes the same’ is not necessary here.
Lines 101: ‘has’ → have
Line 106: ‘ the impact of satellite polarimetry on aerosol monitoring remains fairly’. I do not quite understand this sentence. Can the authors rephrase it?
Lines 122-123: the full names of MAP and SRON are missing.
Line 147: ‘This is significant’->’This is a significant’
Line 160: ‘. This study’ →’, this study’
Line 183: ‘has’ →’have’
Line 223: ‘0.1° and 1°’ did the authors mean 0.1° and 0.1°?
Line 225: It is better to clarify how the authors transform from original resolution to MERRA-2 resolution, by interpolation or aggregation?
Line 234: ‘contribution’→contributions
Line 239: ‘factions’→ fraction
Line 241: Can authors explain ‘fractions of 6 components’ a bit more ? Is it the mass fraction or extinction fraction?
Line 253: ‘seem’ →seems
Line 277:’and considering the apparent of aerosol composition climatological patterns. ’ this sentence is difficult to read with grammar error (apparent of). Can the authors rephrase it?
Line 310: ‘columnar’→colume
Line 619: ‘Moreover, possible the hygroscopicity of aged dust’. Can the authors rephrase this sentence to a more readable format?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2022-108-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022
This study presents the climatology of aerosol mass burden for different components based on a newly developed algorithm GRASP/Component with the input of POLDER-3 multi-channal radiance observations. Global observations of aerosol component concentration are crucial for both the estimation of aerosol effective radiative forcing from satellite observations and also the evaluation of the performance of global aerosol models, but retrieving those information from satellite has been challenging. Most of previous studies just used the column aerosol optical properties (e.g., AOD/AODf/AI) to estimate aerosol forcings, it seems somewhat rough but is the only feasible option. The dataset presented here is thus very valuable and useful for our scientific community. This manuscript is well organized, the analysis methods are technically sound. I personally think this manuscript is suitable for publication after a minor revision.
Response: Thank you very much for the time and efforts you have put into reviewing the manuscript. We are very grateful for your positive evaluations and helpful comments on our work, which have enabled us to improve the manuscript. Here are our point-by-point responses to the comments:
Detail comments:
- Figures showing annual mean concentrations of different aerosol components (2005 - 2013) are quite interesting, but not much mentioned in the main text. Many recent studied revealed the aerosol effective forcing changed during last two decades due to the change in anthropogenic emissions (https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-2022-295;
https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-12-1649-2020). I feel that it could be quite interesting to plot the long-term trends of different aerosol components over main industrial regions (West Europe, East U.S., China and India) and discuss the potential implication or linkage to the observed radiative forcing trend.
Response: We appreciated the reviewer’s comment and suggestion very much. As the referee mentioned, the linear trends of different aerosol components and also the potential implication or link to the observed radiative forcing trend are highly interesting and merit a more focused effort. We also agree that a regionally zoomed analysis of the linear trends of components, as well as their potential implications, should be in scope of future studies. At present, due to very large volume of produced data in this publication and limited resources, we have added only a global overview of linear trends of components. We also added a discussion on potential implications, including two citation (see below), in order to highlight the scientific significances of the presented in our study component retrievals.
We have added the text in the abstract of the revised version (lines 43-45): “The extensive satellite-based aerosol component dataset is expected to be useful for improving global aerosol emissions and component-resolved radiative forcing estimations.”
Also, lines 807-821 and 865-870 in the revised version: “More importantly, the data assimilation of this extensive satellite-based aerosol component dataset can importantly contribute to improving global aerosol emissions estimation and further improvement of accuracy of the estimated aerosol radiative forcing in general and per aerosol component in particular. For instance, the AOD and the AAOD products derived from POLDER-3 observations have been already used to constrain GEOS-Chem inverse modeling for the improvement of global black carbon, organic carbon and desert dust aerosol emissions (Chen et al., 2018, 2019). Using the presented in this study additional satellite-based aerosol component products, the further improvement of global aerosol emissions estimation is thus expected. The presented efforts are also in line with the studies suggesting that the employment of satellite-constrained anthropogenic and natural aerosol emissions by the climate models is required to improve the accuracy of aerosol radiative forcing estimations (e.g., Bellouin et al., 2020; Quaas et al., 2022). That is, the linear trends in column concentration of the main aerosol components, such as BC, BrC, CAI and CNAI as shown in Fig. S1 in the supplement, can provide a better global scale satellite-measured constraints on the properties of anthropogenic (BC and BrC) and natural (CAI and CNAI) aerosols and will contribute to improving the accuracy of anthropogenic aerosol radiative forcing estimations.”
Fig S1. Linear trends in column concentration of BC, BrC, CAI and CNAI components with the criteria of AOD (440 nm) > 0.2 and for BC (> 1 mg/m2), BrC (> 10 mg/m2), CAI (> 2 mg/m2), and CANI (> 50 mg/m2).
Reference:
Bellouin, N., Davies, W., Shine, K. P., Quaas, J., Mülmenstädt, J., Forster, P. M., Smith, C., Lee, L., Regayre, L., Brasseur, G., Sudarchikova, N., Bouarar, I., Boucher, O., and Myhre, G.: Radiative forcing of climate change from the Copernicus reanalysis of atmospheric composition, Earth Syst. Sci. Data, 12, 1649–1677, doi: 10.5194/essd-12-1649-2020, 2020.
Quaas, J., Jia, H., Smith, C., Albright, A. L., Aas, W., Bellouin, N., Boucher, O., Doutriaux-Boucher, M., Forster, P. M., Grosvenor, D., Jenkins, S., Klimont, Z., Loeb, N. G., Ma, X., Naik, V., Paulot, F., Stier, P., Wild, M., Myhre, G. and Schulz, M.: Robust evidence for reversal in the aerosol effective climate forcing trend, Atmos. Chem. Phys. Discuss., 1–25, doi: 10.5194/acp-2022-295, 2022.
- Line 281: How can the authors conclude ‘the GRASP/Component provided the overall most consistent both total and detailed aerosol properties’ based on the findings by Zhang et al. (2021)? I don't understand the causal link. Could the authors develop a bit on this?
Response: We appreciated the reviewer’s suggestion very much. We added more descriptions and explanations in the revision (Lines 311-317): “Indeed, Zhang et al. (2021) validated GRASP/Component optical properties against AERONET data and concluded that generated total AOD values have minimal bias both over land (-0.02 for 550 nm) and ocean (0.01 for 550 nm), similar to total AOD provided by GRASP/Models, while the detailed properties such as AE, AODF and AODC have similarly good validation metric as GRASP/HP. This suggests that the GRASP/Component products provide the overall most consistent both total and detailed aerosol properties (e.g., spectral AODF, AODC, and SSA etc.) with respect to previous GRASP (Models, HP, and Optimized) products.”.
- Figure 2: I guess STD here is calculated from daily data? Anyway, it is better to specify how the authors do the calculation.
Response: Thank you for this comment. We added more descriptions and explanations in the revised version (Lines 346-348): “Figure 2 shows the corresponding standard deviations (STD, calculated from all months data during the period 2005-2013, same for other components in the following) divided by the mean of BC concentration.”
- Also, in my opinion, the manuscript would benefit from editing help from someone with full professional proficiency in English.
Response: We appreciated the reviewer’s conscientious correction very much and we also have checked the grammar and typos carefully and corrected them in the revised manuscript.
Minor corrections:
- Lines 24: “an intermediate retrievals” -> “intermediate retrievals”
Response: Done.
- Line 30: “concentration” -> “concentrations”
Response: Done.
- Line 32: “aerosol” -> “aerosols”
Response: Done.
- Line 45: the full name of IPCC is needed when first mentioned.
Response: It was added in the revised version.
- Line 58: “the importance of having sufficient spectral resolution of measurements to capture the differences” -> “the importance of sufficient spectral resolution of measurements on capturing the differences”
Response: Done.
- Line 85: I feel that “and sometimes the same” is not necessary here.
Response: It was removed in the revised version and more explanations were added to make it clear.
- Lines 101: “has” -> “have”
Response: Done.
- Line 106: “the impact of satellite polarimetry on aerosol monitoring remains fairly.” I do not quite understand this sentence. Can the authors rephrase it?
Response: It is rephrased and clarified (Lines 115-123): “However, due to rather limited amount of available multi-angle polarization observations and the complexity in their interpretation, the added value of satellite polarimetry on aerosol monitoring remains questionable. Indeed, the polarimetry has enhanced sensitivities to numerous atmospheric parameters and inversion algorithms are required to consider all these sensitivities adequately. Partially due to this complexity, the practical advantages of multi-angular polarimetric retrieval were not convincingly exhibited by the available operational multi-angular polarimetric products in the past for a long time and only recently the advanced aerosol products (including present study) make the advantages of the polarimetry for aerosol remote sensing more evident (e.g., see discussion in Dubovik et al., 2019, 2021b).”
- Lines 122-123: the full names of MAP and SRON are missing.
Response: We added the full names of MAP and SRON in the revision.
- Line 147: “This is significant” -> “This is a significant”
Response: Done.
- Line 160: “. This study” -> “, this study”
Response: Done.
- Line 183: “has” -> “have”
Response: Done.
- Line 223: “0.1° and 1°” did the authors mean 0.1° and 0.1°?
Response: There are two different spatial resolution for Level 3 products: 0.1° and 1°. We rewrote the sentence in the revision (Line 244) to clarify that as “There are two different spatial resolution of 0.1° and 1° for the Level-3 products”.
- Line 225: It is better to clarify how the authors transform from original resolution to MERRA-2 resolution, by interpolation or aggregation?
Response: We added more descriptions and explanations to clarify it in the revision.
- Line 234: “contribution” -> “contributions”
Response: Done.
- Line 239: “factions” -> “fraction”
Response: Done.
- Line 241: Can authors explain “fractions of 6 components” a bit more? Is it the mass fraction or extinction fraction?
Response: We added more descriptions and explanations in the revision (Lines 267-272): “Thus, the main conceptual difference of GRASP/Component from GRASP Optimized and High Precision is the retrieval of volume fractions of six components (black carbon, brown carbon, fine- and coarse-mode non-absorbing insoluble, coarse-mode insoluble absorbing, mainly representing iron oxides in mineral dust, and relative humidity for the host calculation) instead of direct retrieval of the real and imaginary parts of complex refractive index at each wavelength (12 parameters in GRASP Optimized and High Precision)”.
- Line 253: “seem” -> “seems”
Response: Done.
- Line 277: “and considering the apparent of aerosol composition climatological patterns.” this sentence is difficult to read with grammar error (apparent of). Can the authors rephrase it?
Response: Sorry for this mistake, the revised version is (Lines 308-310): “Therefore, the main focus of this study is on the analysis/verifications of aerosol composition (fractions) retrievals and considering the apparent climatological patterns of aerosol composition. apparent of aerosol composition climatological patterns”.
- Line 310: “columnar” -> “column”
Response: Done, also through the whole manuscript.
- Line 619: “Moreover, possible the hygroscopicity of aged dust.” Can the authors rephrase this sentence to a more readable format?
Response: Thank you for your attention, the revised version is (Lines 672-680): “The aerosol water presence over ocean during the dust transport and near southern Africa during the biomass burning is also rather logical because of higher atmospheric relative humidity. Moreover, a significant increase of mineral dust hygroscopicity was attributed in several studies to the aging processes and the dust mixing with soluble hygroscopic material (Sullivan et al., 2009; Tang et al., 2016). Impact of such mixtures on remote sensing observations was also observed (Derimian et al., 2017; Falkovich et al., 2004).”
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2022-108-AC1 - AC3: 'Reply on RC1', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022
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AC5: 'Reply on RC1', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022
A new response to the comment below is updated.
Line 277: “and considering the apparent of aerosol composition climatological patterns.” this sentence is difficult to read with grammar error (apparent of). Can the authors rephrase it?
Response: Sorry for this mistake, the revised version is (Lines 308-310): “Therefore, the main focus of this study is on the analysis/verifications of aerosol composition (fractions) retrievals and considering the apparent climatological patterns of aerosol composition.”
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2022-108-AC5
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on essd-2022-108', Anonymous Referee #2, 06 May 2022
This study presents the dataset for the climatology of aerosol components globally, which was derived by GRASP (Generalized Retrieval of Atmosphere and Surface Properties algorithm) component approach from POLDER-3 satellite observations. The spatial and temporal distributions of satellite-based aerosol components on a global scale are discussed and show reasonable agreement with general expectation, as well as the comparisons of BC and Dust between GRASP component retrievals and MERRA-2 products. The dataset of aerosol components presented in this study provides additional inside information about aerosol properties that is much difficult to be obtained but imperative information for improving the estimation of chemical transport models. The dataset and its more applications in future will be interesting for the scientific community. The manuscript is well-written and well-organized. Therefore, I have some minor comments before it could be accepted for publication.
Minor comments:
1. The full name of abbreviations should be provided when it is mentioned at the first time. Such as, POLDER-3 in Line 21, AERONET in Line 34, IPCC in Line 45 etc. Please check it in the whole manuscript.2. Line 75: “Ganguly et al. (2009b, 2009a)” should be “Ganguly et al., (2009a, 2009b)”
3. Line 99: “look-up table (LUT)” should be “Look-Up Table (LUT)”
4. Lines 145-147: Please add references to “This GRASP/Component approach derives fractions of aerosol components together with size distribution and non-spherical fraction of aerosol particle directly from the measured radiances without an intermediate step of optical aerosol properties retrieval.”
5. Line 166: Please add references to “based on preliminary sparse analysis of derived aerosol component information”. Please clarify what you could obtain from the study of Zhang et al. (2021b) in Line 167.
6. Line 273: “(Li et al., 2020b, 2020a; Zhang et al., 2021)” should be “(Li et al., 2020a, 2020b; Zhang et al., 2021)”
7. Line 350: The reference of “(Schuster et al., 2016b)” in Line 350 is same to the reference of “Schuster et al. (2016)” in Line 63. Please modify and remove one from the reference list.
8. Please clarify what 6 components are in the Line 244 and “the retrieval of fractions of 6 components” should be “the retrieval of 6 components fractions”
9. Lines 263-266: “Thus, using fractions of the components and relative humidity as variable parameters, the refractive index of a particle composed by several insoluble components (e.g., BC, BrC, mineral dust etc.) suspended in such host were determined by the MG equations based on the calculation of electric fields”. I do not understand this sentence. Please clarify.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2022-108-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022
This study presents the dataset for the climatology of aerosol components globally, which was derived by GRASP (Generalized Retrieval of Atmosphere and Surface Properties algorithm) component approach from POLDER-3 satellite observations. The spatial and temporal distributions of satellite-based aerosol components on a global scale are discussed and show reasonable agreement with general expectation, as well as the comparisons of BC and Dust between GRASP component retrievals and MERRA-2 products. The dataset of aerosol components presented in this study provides additional inside information about aerosol properties that is much difficult to be obtained but imperative information for improving the estimation of chemical transport models. The dataset and its more applications in future will be interesting for the scientific community. The manuscript is well-written and well-organized. Therefore, I have some minor comments before it could be accepted for publication.
Response: Thank you very much for the time and efforts you have put into reviewing the manuscript. We are very grateful for your positive evaluations and helpful comments on our work, which have enabled us to improve the manuscript. Here are our point-by-point responses to the comments:
Minor comments:
- The full name of abbreviations should be provided when it is mentioned at the first time. Such as, POLDER-3 in Line 21, AERONET in Line 34, IPCC in Line 45 etc. Please check it in the whole manuscript.
Response: We thank the reviewer for the attention and pointing this out. We added these abbreviation meanings in the revised version, as well as for AE, AODC, AAOD, and SSA in lines 176-177.
- Line 75: “Ganguly et al. (2009b, 2009a)” should be “Ganguly et al., (2009a, 2009b)”
Response: Done.
- Line 99: “look-up table (LUT)” should be “Look-Up Table (LUT)”
Response: Done.
- Lines 145-147: Please add references to “This GRASP/Component approach derives fractions of aerosol components together with size distribution and non-spherical fraction of aerosol particle directly from the measured radiances without an intermediate step of optical aerosol properties retrieval.”
Response: Done.
- Line 166: Please add references to “based on preliminary sparse analysis of derived aerosol component information”. Please clarify what you could obtain from the study of Zhang et al. (2021b) in Line 167.
Response: We added references and more descriptions in the revision (Lines 185-187): “based on preliminary sparse analysis of derived aerosol component information (Li et al., 2019, 2020a, 2020b) and on the results of study by Zhang et al. (2021b) demonstrating component approach can provide comparable and sometime even better aerosol optical products”.
- Line 273: “(Li et al., 2020b, 2020a; Zhang et al., 2021)” should be “(Li et al., 2020a, 2020b; Zhang et al., 2021)”
Response: Done.
- Line 350: The reference of “(Schuster et al., 2016b)” in Line 350 is same to the reference of “Schuster et al. (2016)” in Line 63. Please modify and remove one from the reference list.
Response: Done.
- Please clarify what 6 components are in the Line 244 and “the retrieval of fractions of 6 components” should be “the retrieval of 6 components fractions”
Response: We added more descriptions and explanations in the revised version (Lines 267-272): “Thus, the main conceptual difference of GRASP/Component from GRASP Optimized and High Precision is the retrieval of volume fractions of six components (black carbon, brown carbon, fine- and coarse-mode non-absorbing insoluble, coarse-mode insoluble absorbing, mainly representing iron oxides in mineral dust, and relative humidity for the host calculation) instead of direct retrieval of the real and imaginary parts of complex refractive index at each wavelength (12 parameters in GRASP Optimized and High Precision)”.
- Lines 263-266: “Thus, using fractions of the components and relative humidity as variable parameters, the refractive index of a particle composed by several insoluble components (e.g., BC, BrC, mineral dust etc.) suspended in such host were determined by the MG equations based on the calculation of electric fields”. I do not understand this sentence. Please clarify.
Response: The sentence is rephrased and clarified as follows (Lines 294-298): “First, the complex dielectric constant of each aerosol component is computed from the corresponding complex refractive index. Then, the Maxwell Garnett dielectric functions are used for calculating the dielectric constant of the aerosol mixture from component fractions and their dielectric constants. At last, the complex refractive index of aerosol mixture can be obtained from the complex dielectric constant of aerosol mixture.”.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2022-108-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022
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RC3: 'Comment on essd-2022-108', Yingxi Shi, 26 May 2022
“Climatology of aerosol components concentration derived by GRASP algorithm from multi-angular polarimetric POLDER-3 observations” submitted to ESSD is a well written paper that studied the global climatology of aerosol species based on GRASP-Component algorithm on POLDER-3. The paper describes the GRASP-Component algorithm, highlights its advantage in retrieving aerosol component, presents the aerosol component global climatology, and compared it to MERRA-2 reanalysis. There are many interpolations of the GRASP results and explanation of potential error sources. The paper is well organized, and the presented climatology can be helpful in terms of understanding the global aerosol type distribution and changes. My main issue first is it requires more discussion of uncertainties in GRASP-Component algorithm and similarly some of the typing climatology. Second is that it needs some more discussion of how this community can use this information, especially in terms of bridging the gaps between remote sensing and modeling communities, which I think is the real advantage of this product.
- When in the beginning defining these aerosol components, it will be intuitive to relate these with commonly defined nature aerosol species.
- Both in BC and BrC annual maps, I couldn’t find elevated signature of smoke over Southeast Asia. But we know that that is one of the major regions that smoldering burring occurs with most of the dry year during El nino phase. Is it due to large cloud coverage? If so, can data availability also line contoured on top of the global map?
- In CNAI map Figure 13, we see a belt of coarse non-absorbing insoluble aerosol near central-south Africa. That is one region that burning of savanna will occur, but very limited dust shall be found there. Similar region was highlighted up in BC map, which shows that these are burning region as well. The cause of these signal needs to be explained.
- The explanation of FNAS map in Figure 17 mentioned aged dust, however, it is hard to believe that aged dust will occur over land. Thus, it is unclear to me what is causing FNAS signal over Africa during DJF, JJA, and SON. To me these looks like signals from biomass burning again, but is burning produce fine mode non-absorbing soluble aerosols?
- MERRA2 has more BC than GRASP-C globally, especially over East Asia. First of all, the recent GOCART model included BrC as well. (G.P. Schill, K.D. Froyd, H. Bian, A. Kupc, C. Williamson, C.B. Brock, E. Ray, R.S. Hornbrook, A.J. Hills6, E.C. Apel, M. Chen, P. Colarco, and D.M. Murphy, The ubiquity of dilute, aged smoke in the global remote troposphere and its effect on climate, Nature Geoscience, 13(6), doi:10.1038/s41561-020-0586-1, Jun., 2020.) Author can use that version to compare BC and BrC separately. Second, it does seem like some of the biomass burning signal is shown in dust related component (see what I pointed out before.)
- MERRA2 has a lot more dust over dust belt. I agree that if GRASP-C produced dust cannot be represented only by one component, the systematic low at North Africa is expected. But the high value from GRASP-C product over southern Africa needs to be explained.
- Line 236. How are these refractive indexes determined for components? Especially for mineral dust, large variation can occur based on the origin of the dust. Summarize the approach and uncertainties associated with it.
Other minor stuff
- Line 439-444 mentioned both volume ratio and mass ratio. It is confusing for reader to do the conversion, so providing a mass ratio range from the used volume fraction might be easier for reader to understand author’s point.
- Line 389-390. The statement of BC and BrC relation with smoke is not entirely accurate. Many papers discuss the more absorbing vs. less absorbing smoke, including those from AERONET groups (Tom Eck), the recent one is here (Junghenn Noyes KT, Kahn RA, Limbacher JA, Li Z. Canadian and Alaskan wildfire smoke particle properties, their evolution, and controlling factors, from satellite observations. Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics Discussions. 2021 Nov 3:1-34.)
- Why are standard deviation plots using 4 identical color bars while seasonal map using one unified color bar? Can they be consolidated?
- Color bar in seasonal map should have units on it.
- Line 325-326 “that low…is small.” This sentence is confusing. Low STD/MEAN is observed when intensity of emission is small? or low STD/MEAN is observed due to low emission. Nevertheless, in MAM the STD of BC is high in Asia, indicating changing of BC emissions.
- Line 279 “minimal bias”, be specific.
- Line 96. Flower has some volcanic paper with Ralph Kahn.
- Line 83. Data assimilation paper adding these two citations (Zhang J, Reid JS, Westphal DL, Baker NL, Hyer EJ. A system for operational aerosol optical depth data assimilation over global oceans. Journal of Geophysical Research: Atmospheres. 2008 May 27;113(D10).; Shi Y, Zhang J, Reid JS, Hyer EJ, Hsu NC. Critical evaluation of the MODIS Deep Blue aerosol optical depth product for data assimilation over North Africa. Atmos Measure Tech Discuss. 2012 Oct 24;5(5):7815-65.)
- Line 32, “The aerosol optical properties” means what properties? Need clarification.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2022-108-RC3 - AC4: 'Reply on RC3', Lei Li, 24 Jun 2022