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EUREC4A observations from the SAFIRE ATR42 aircraft
Marie Lothon
Julien Delanoë
Pierre Coutris
Jean-Claude Etienne
Franziska Aemisegger
Anna Lea Albright
Thierry André
Hubert Bellec
Alexandre Baron
Jean-François Bourdinot
Pierre-Etienne Brilouet
Aurélien Bourdon
Jean-Christophe Canonici
Christophe Caudoux
Patrick Chazette
Michel Cluzeau
Céline Cornet
Jean-Philippe Desbios
Dominique Duchanoy
Cyrille Flamant
Benjamin Fildier
Christophe Gourbeyre
Laurent Guiraud
Tetyana Jiang
Claude Lainard
Christophe Le Gac
Christian Lendroit
Julien Lernould
Thierry Perrin
Frédéric Pouvesle
Pascal Richard
Nicolas Rochetin
Kevin Salaün
Alfons Schwarzenboeck
Guillaume Seurat
Bjorn Stevens
Julien Totems
Ludovic Touzé-Peiffer
Gilles Vergez
Jessica Vial
Leonie Villiger
Raphaela Vogel
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2021-459', Alan Blyth, 18 Feb 2022
This paper describes the observations gathered by the SAFIRE ATR42
research aircraft during the EUREC4A field campaign. The paper is very
clear, well written, and the figures are well chosen. I enjoyed reading
it. It provides a very valuable and informative summary of the ATR
aircraft operations and description of the datasets produced. The
section on the consistency among observations is particularly
interesting and important for the EUREC4A community.The paper will be a excellent resource for scientists wishing to analyse
SAFIRE ATR42 EUREC4A data now, and for many years to come.A few relatively minor comments follow which the authors may wish to
consider.l205 I wondered what the actual description should be. The beginning and
end of these episodes is a bit unclear in reality and also the second
episode of elevated aerosols was over a few days, not just on 11 Feb.
As far as I understand, there were two periods of mineral dust, with the
second period containing significant biomass burning. I would suggest
30 Jan-6 Feb and 9-12 Feb based on data from Ragged Point (Peter
Gallimore, personal communication), but it could be +/1 day. Perhaps use
the word "about"?Section 3.1.3. It would be good to consider Lawson and Cooper (1990,
JAOT, 7, p480), particularly with regard to the wetting caused by cloud
drops.l265. Is it correct that *both* the Rosemount and fine wire
temperature data are processed at 1 Hz and at 25 Hz?l285. Perhaps "sensors mentioned above"?
l285. Reference at this point for the WVSS-II?
Similarly for the Licor and KH20, and perhaps other instruments
mentioned? Or collectively for a previous project?l314. g m^(-3)
l321. Add "respectively"?
l415. ...subcloud layer and out of cloud at the cloud base level? Just
to be clear? Likewise, in the next line, ... at the cloud-base level?l417. Refer back to the last sentence of Section 2.
l430. References for the CDP-2 and 2D-S when they are first mentioned.
l474. It be would be useful to discuss the overlap size range for the two
probes. Was there always good agreement that allowed there to be a
unique distribution to be created?l486. Semi-colon after Table 8.
l491. To be consistent, perhaps ... underestimate the LWC measurement
when such large drops are present. Drizzle is defined in the previous
paragraph.I do wonder, for cloud lwc, how much of an error there will be due to
this incomplete evaporation for such large drops which occur in
relatively low concentrations. Is it larger than the error due to
mis-sizing of large drops?l497. It might be better to say the concentration of cloud drops is
disproportionally less in a few cases with larger aerosol
concentrations.There are a few points where that is not true, which might suggest
differences in hygroscopicity as mentioned.Fig 11 caption. at the cloud base level?
l559. Unambiguous?
l563. I think it's better to start a new sentence for the text in
parenthesis. Similar for l588 and elsewhere.Figure 17 caption. It is obvious, but it might help some readers to
explain the points and lines in the caption and say how the average was
calculated.Figure 18 caption. (in orange) should be blue.
Figure 19 caption. It would be good to describe the different lines.
l857. Add "more than" before 500 /cm3? It depends on size.
l894. Add (Figures B1 and B2)?
Similarly for App C.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2021-459-RC1 -
RC2: 'Comment on essd-2021-459', Anonymous Referee #2, 01 Mar 2022
This paper describes a very valuable data set on cloud and other atmospheric properties acquired during the deployment of the French Safire ATR42 aircraft in the framework of the EUREC4A campaign out of Barbados in early 2020. In the first part the flight strategy is outlined in detail while the second part gives an overview of the measurements and the available data sets. The paper is very well written and the descriptions of the flight strategy and the data set are mostly concise yet sufficiently detailed. For the more extensive parts of the data published elsewhere respective references to more complete discussion are given. The first part laying out the flight strategy and giving the meteorological context of each flight is very helpful for the interpretation and further use of the data. The data is well structured with extensive meta data and accessible in a database. I recommend the paper and data to be published after addressing a few very minor points.
Throughout the paper acronyms should be spelled out at the first use more consistently. In addition, a table of acronyms might be useful to guide the reader. Instrument names could also be listed together with a reference to a published characterization if available.
In some sections the typesetting of mathematical symbols in italics needs to be cleaned up.
P20/l303f: From the wording of the sentence it is not entirely clear if the calibration parameters for the Licor humidity data were assumed to be constant for all flights or if this was also verified.
P22/l351: The sentence seems incomplete. “..often appear dark because the choice was made…” Do the authors mean the choice of exposure time?
P25/l386: Platform should be spelled in English (maybe give the French name in the parenthesis).
P25: Where the time series of the in-situ data synchronized to the ATR GPS time accounting for potential plumbing delays due to different lengths sample lines?
Sec 3.4: How was the size calibration of the aerosol and could instruments performed? Was the stability of the calibration checked in the field after each flight?
P29/Fig 10.: The authors should consider reporting also (or exclusively?) the median to describe the statistics of the various quantities. Using the mean but an 10-90 percentiles seems inconsistent and given that the distributions are not Gauss-distributed the median is more meaningful.
P44/l784: I am not sure “diagnosed” is the right word here. Maybe “derived” or “deduced”?
l786: see above.P45/Fig 18, middle panel: Should the lines be drawn in different colors? It might be good to include the cloud-only case also into the legend of the middle panel for clarity.
P48/Fig 19: It is not clear what the different colors indicate. It would be good to add a legend to this plot or use a consistent color scheme for all panels.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2021-459-RC2 -
AC1: 'Comment on essd-2021-459', Sandrine Bony, 29 Mar 2022
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://essd.copernicus.org/preprints/essd-2021-459/essd-2021-459-AC1-supplement.pdf