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ClimAVA‑SWE: A High‑Resolution CMIP6‑Based Snow Water Equivalent Dataset for the Western United States
Abstract. The ClimAVA-SWE dataset provides bias-corrected daily snow water equivalent (SWE) estimates at approximately 4 km spatial resolution across the western United States, publicly available through the Harvard Dataverse and can be accessed via its official repository at https://doi.org/10.7910/DVN/SCD2VT (Khoshnood Motlagh, de Lima Moraes and Smith, 2026). The dataset is generated using the Spatial Interactions Downscaling for Snow Water Equivalent (SPID-SWE) method, a data-driven statistical downscaling framework that integrates high-resolution reference SWE data (NSIDC-0719) with daily outputs from an ensemble of 14 CMIP6 global climate models (GCMs). SPID-SWE employs a dual random forest modeling strategy that explicitly distinguishes snow accumulation and ablation phases, improving seasonal SWE representation relative to single-phase approaches. ClimAVA-SWE spans a historical period (1981–2014) and future projections (2015–2100) under three Shared Socioeconomic Pathways (SSP245, SSP370, and SSP585). The pixel-based design of SPID-SWE independently downscales each grid cell across space and time, preserving both spatial and temporal variability in the SWE signal. Although performance is conditioned on the quality of the driving input data, the dataset demonstrates strong accuracy and computational efficiency, providing a robust and scalable resource for high-resolution climate and hydrological impact applications.
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ClimAVA‑SWE: A High‑Resolution CMIP6‑Based Snow Water Equivalent Dataset for the Western United States Sajad Khoshnood Motlagh, Andre Geraldo de Lima Moraes, and Kayla Smith https://doi.org/10.7910/DVN/SCD2VT
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ESSD-2026-203
This paper extends the downscaling method of de Lima Moraes and Khoshnood Motlagh (2024), which was applied to daily precipitation min and max temperature, to SWE. The authors apply bias correction (Quantile Mapping) and statistical downscaling (Random Forest) to fourteen CMIP6 GCMs.
I found the results to be a bit circular while at the same time lacking specific insight; some aspects of the methods need additional explanation. I could have used a bit more detail on the SPID method because I found myself referring to the original publication to try and clarify aspects. I found the analysis of those results in the context of snow and the applied SPID method to be a bit thin. For example, the authors present results for two GCMs with two different spatial resolutions but don’t really discuss how and why their method might be sensitive to spatial resolution. Further, I would have liked better linkages between sections to show how one set of results informs or impacts another piece. For example, how do the residual errors of the bias corrected and downscaled GCM compare? This might give insight into how the RF model is operating and how it is translating from coarse to fine resolution.
The manuscript contains a substantial number of technical errors surrounding the referencing. In text citations tack dates and the reference list contains errors, incomplete citations and broken dois. Some of the statements in the results refer to information not presented in the figures/Tables or that cannot easily be interpreted from them.
Major comments
Suggested structure:
3.0 Results
3.1 Evaluation of GCM SWE and Bias Correction
3.1.1 GCM SWE
3.1.2 Impact of Bias Correction
3.2 Validation of SPID-SWE
3.2.1 Grid-cell Level validation
3.2.2 Watershed-level validation
Minor comments
L88: ‘the existing research’ about what? Please be more specific.
L94-97: Inaccurate description of GlobSnow product for two reasons. (1) GlobSnow is a combined passive microwave and in situ product – it assimilates in situ snow depths (2) GloSnow does not provide SWE estimates over complex terrain.
L98-101: Did you consider comparing your downscaled output to ASO data?
L104-105: Not completely accurate or complete. MERRA2 is 0.5°x0.652° which is closer to 50km. There’s also ERA5 (31 km/0.25°, Hersbach et al. 2020) JRA-3Q (0.375°, Kosaka et al. 2024).
Hersbach, H., Bell, B., Berrisford, P., Hirahara, S., Horányi, A., Muñoz-Sabater, J., Nicolas, J., Peubey, C., Radu, R., Schepers, D., Simmons, A., Soci, C., Abdalla, S., Abellan, X., Balsamo, G., Bechtold, P., Biavati, G., Bidlot, J., Bonavita, M., De Chiara, G., Dahlgren, P., Dee, D., Diamantakis, M., Dragani, R., Flemming, J., Forbes, R., Fuentes, M., Geer, A., Haimberger, L., Healy, S., Hogan, R.J., Hólm, E., Janisková, M., Keeley, S., Laloyaux, P., Lopez, P., Lupu, C., Radnoti, G., de Rosnay, P., Rozum, I., Vamborg, F., Villaume, S., Thépaut, J.-N., 2020. The ERA5 global reanalysis. Quarterly Journal of the Royal Meteorological Society 146, 1999–2049. https://doi.org/10.1002/qj.3803
Kosaka, Y., Kobayashi, S., Harada, Y., Kobayashi, C., Naoe, H., Yoshimoto, K., Harada, M., Goto, N., Chiba, J., Miyaoka, K., Sekiguchi, R., Deushi, M., Kamahori, H., Nakaegawa, T., Tanaka, T.Y., Tokuhiro, T., Sato, Y., Matsushita, Y., Onogi, K., 2024. The JRA-3Q Reanalysis. Journal of the Meteorological Society of Japan 102, 49–109. https://doi.org/10.2151/jmsj.2024-004
L115-116: references for this statement?
L115-117: Isolated sentence. Does this go with the preceding or following paragraph?
L118-119: same as above (L115-117)
L120-121: Would be good to note, at least in parentheses, what some of these HR SWE products you are referring to are.
L124: long-term analysis of past and future snowpack dynamics
Output 4km grid – is this the same grid as the UA SWE data? Please clarify the output grid specs somewhere.
L171: How did you treat cases where partial pixels overlap?
L195-198: could do with a bit more details on SPID method (see general comment)
L206-207: Could this be suggesting that the coarse resolution can't capture patchy snow and partial snow cover within the coarse pixel that is common during the ablation period?
L226-228: Why not just use the original reference data in its original resolution?
L270-272: ‘results’ of what? It would help the reader if this text was a bit more specific. Perhaps something along the lines of ‘Downscaling results for two example GCMs bounding the range of spatial resolutions in our GCM ensemble are presented below. Results include both pixel-based and watershed validation spanning 42 years (1982-2023)’.’
L281: Is this (metric vs swe magnitude) shown anywhere? When you say 'accuracy' are you only referring to correlation here? Areas with higher SWE seem to have larger RMSE, although I find it a bit hard to infer from the maps.
L284: How ‘small’ and is there any relation to SWE magnitude? Or, is it related to snow cover duration or something else?
L286: What are the SWE classes you are referring to? Where is the evidence (Figure/table/etc.) for this? Do you have results aggregated by SWE magnitude or 'SWE class' you can refer the reader to? One idea could be to show the mean or peak SWE values in another map.
L290-293: From the information provided it seems that it’s more stronger correlations rather than necessarily higher performance overall? Perhaps the figures aren’t telling the full story.
L306-307: Can you think of why the FR might have a less negative bias than the CR? Second, why might you expect differences in performance at different spatial resolutions. You decide to present the extremes but need to relate the results to the input data and downscaling setup. For example, with the CR the model searches much farther away from the pixel in question than it does for the FR – how might this impact the downscaling? There will be more 4km pixels with the same overlapping and adjoining GCM-resolution grids at the CR than the FR. Does this impact the results? If so, how? I’d like the authors to pick some of these elements to discuss the results in terms of the input data and model setup.
L318-319: Are you able to show these basins on one of the figures somehow? This would help the reader tie what is shown in Fig 2 and 3 with Table 2.
Section 3.2 – see major comment #2 and L306-307.
L367-374: This statement contradicts L139-141. SNOTEL is not independent of the reference dataset. Your reference dataset assimilates SNOTEL observations so it is expected that there will be a strong correlation between the two. (see also major comment #5). Second, Fig 4 shows that the downscaled data differs from the reference and SNOTEL, I would have liked to have seen the authors touch on this if only briefly.
Sect 3.3.2 – The existing text should be condensed.
L385-386: Logically you'd think that a bias correction to a given reference would improve agreement with that same reference or am I missing something here? Maybe clarify how and why the QM approach might not lead to improvement. (see also major comment #4). Again, I apologize if I’m completely off-base here. If so, please disregard.
L410: remove ‘excluding snow-free area’ (is redundant)
L442-442: Isn’t this expected? Or am I missing something?
L445: It’s interesting to me that the range is larger after correction. Any idea as to why this is?
L450-451: Any idea why certain models show greater improvement than others and why some might show worsening?
L473: Could this be due, at least in part, to the fact that if the GCM underestimates (which your results seem to suggest) that there’s a good chance the snow season (later onset, earlier snow-free) will also be shorter if the model ties snow cover to SWE. Since your QM application can’t add snow, it won’t be able to adjust these dates and associated time metrics unless they occur too early (onset) or too late (snow-free). Might this suggest that the timing metrics, at least onset and melt, aren’t appropriate metrics given the limitations of the QM you described? I’m curious why you think there was little change in the date of peak.
L524: consistency of the ClimAVA-SWE or of the bias corrected GCM data?
L547: suggest ‘Most downscaled GCMs’ for higher specificity
L549-554: Are these the same patterns of over/under estimation you saw after bias correction? i.e. Does this mirror the residual biases in the GCMs after bias correction or is it additional (or less) error as a consequence of the downscaling?
L650-660 – Data Availability. Please add somewhere that there is one file per 15yr period for a total of 280 individual netcdf files. (2 per GCM for historical and 6x3(scenarios) per GCM = 20 per GCM x 14 GCMs = 280). See also comment Data.
Tables and figures
Figure 2
Figure 6 and associate text: Since QM adjusts the distribution isn't an almost identical CDF expected? How much does this section add to the paper? See major comment #4.
Technical corrections
In-text citations contain errors – missing dates and inconsistent format
Reference list contains errors: no date, journal missing, not all dois link correctly. Please carefully check all in text citations and full reference list.
Examples:
Livneh et al. (no date) should be:
Livneh, B., E. A. Rosenberg, C. Lin, B. Nijssen, V. Mishra, K. M. Andreadis, E. P. Maurer, and D. P. Lettenmaier, 2013: A Long-Term Hydrologically Based Dataset of Land Surface Fluxes and States for the Conterminous United States: Update and Extensions. J. Climate, 26, 9384–9392, https://doi.org/10.1175/JCLI-D-12-00508.1.
Repeated de Lima Moraes 2024 reference: L831-836
L957-958: Incorrect Daymet reference
(No date) ‘Daymet: Daily Surface Weather Data on a 1-km Grid for North America, Version 4 R1 Get Data’. Available at: https://doi.org/10.3334/ORNLDAAC/2129.
Some isolated sentences that should be combined into proper paragraphs – e.g. L115-119.
L56: relevant instead of true
L537 – ‘Table. 2, examining basin-scale snowpack behavior and inter-model variability.’ Random sentence fragment. Remove.
Data
I found the number of files to be a bit cumbersome. Are there any upload/download restrictions preventing merging of multiple netcdfs from a single model? It would be nice to at least have one file for the historical period. Ideally there would be one file per GCM for the historical and one per scenario for predictions.
Areas and times where the bias correction and/or downscaling is not applied should be masked and flagged accordingly.