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Spatio-temporal evolution of glacial lakes in the Tibetan Plateau over the past 30 years
Abstract. As the Third Pole of the Earth and the Water Tower of Asia, Tibetan Plateau (TP) nurtures large numbers of glacial lakes, which are sensitive to global climate change. These lakes modulate the freshwater ecosystem in the region, but concurrently pose severe threats to the valley population by means of sudden glacial lake outbursts and consequent floods (GLOFs). Lack of high-resolution multi-temporal inventory of glacial lakes in TP hampers a better understanding and prediction of the future trend and risk of glacial lakes. Here, we created a multi-temporal inventory of glacial lakes in TP using 30 years record of satellite images (1990–2019), and discussed their characteristics and spatio-temporal evolution over the years. Results showed that their number and area had increased by 3285 and 258.82 km2, respectively in the last 3 decades. We noticed that different regions of TP exhibited varying change rates in glacial lake size; some regions even showed decreasing trend such as the western Pamir and the eastern Hindu Kush because of reduced rainfall rates. The mapping uncertainty is about 17.5 %, lower than other available datasets, thus making our inventory, a reliable one for the spatio-temporal evolution analysis of glacial lakes in TP. Our lake inventory data are freely available at https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.5574289 (Dou et al., 2021); it can help to study climate change-glacier-glacial lake-GLOF interactions in the third pole and serve input to various hydro-climatic studies.
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2021-354', Anonymous Referee #1, 19 Jan 2022
The authors provided a detailed inventory from a large area for a long-time span. Nevertheless, the similarity to the paper Wang et al. (2020) is too high. They discuss the differences/similarities in the chapter Discussion, this is fair. They also applied more accurate data, but according to the comparison with the paper Wang et al. (2020) they did not get significant difference. The paper is well written, appropriate structure, but they just choose wrong topic. The time difference is too close to the previous paper and climate change can not be seen in the results. If I simplify it little bit, they just confirmed that the study from Wang et al. was well elaborated.
The main task for my review was to compare similarities with other papers from this region. I did not provide a standard review, nevertheless one comment I must stress here. What I see as disadvantages of this paper is the limit for “glacial lake” 10 km from a glacier. The wrong idea behind this limit is that “glacial lake” is “glacial” because of its origin (from the glacial action - glacial erosion of valley or glacial accumulation - moraine). It means that he essence of the term is in the origin of the lake, nothing to do with the distance from glacier, source of water in the lake etc.
My suggestion for rejection is mainly because of the wrong selection of the topic. In this version it is hard to identify any novelty and originality, unfortunately. One solution for future will be to incorporate all glacial lakes into the inventory (as they promised in the title, by the way). The other possibility I see in comparison of different methods of RS inventory, that they can specify the accuracy on the example of the inventory. Other possibility will be wait for significant time difference, that the climate change could be identified.
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Xuanmei Fan, 29 Jan 2022
Dear reviewer,
Thank you for reviewing our manuscript. We carefully re-evaluate the novelty and originality of our study, especially by comparing with other published studies, i.e. Wang et al. (2020). Actually, novelty of a study is always the first and the most important thing to evaluate before conducting any research. The overall objective of our research project is to reveal the spatio-temporal evolution of glaciers and glacial lakes in Tibetan Plateau and their response to climate change. We intended to use other published glacial lake inventories, but we found that there is a lack of high-resolution multi-temporal inventory of glacial lakes covering the whole Tibetan Plateau after through literature review. There are some inventories have high temporal resolution but only covers small regions, while some other inventories covering larger area of Tibetan Plateau but only from one or two periods (i.e. Wang et al., 2020), see the Introduction and Discussion (5.1 Comparison with other glacial lake datasets) for details. This gap motivates us to spend more than one year to collect data and develop methods to create a new inventory, which we believe is more complete, accurate and higher temporal resolution (covering three periods for the whole Tibetan Plateau).
We provide more evidences and responses to your concerns as follows. We hope you can recheck our study.
Thank you again for reviewing the manuscript.
Best regards,
Xuanmei Fan on behalf of all coauthors
Deputy director of State Key Laboratory of Geohazard Prevention and Geoenvironment Protection, Chengdu University of Technology
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Xuanmei Fan, 29 Jan 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on essd-2021-354', Anonymous Referee #2, 15 Feb 2022
Dear editors,
dear authors,
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review the manuscript essd-2021-354 "Spatio-temporal evolution of glacial lakes in the Tibetan Plateau over the past 30 years" by Dou and co-authors. In this study, Dou et al. mapped glacial lakes on the Tibetan Plateau at three time steps between 1990 and 2019. The authors accessed Landsat time series via the Google Earth Engine, which they fed into a processing chain that included thresholds for band indices and manual post-processing. The authors found the largest number and area of glacial lakes reported to date for the Tibetan Plateau. In the discussion, they offer reasons that might explain these differences between previous studies and suggest possible areas of application of this data set.
I was interested in reading this manuscript, especially given the large number of glacial lake inventories at the regional scale that appeared in the last decade (Zheng et al., 2021; Nie, 2017; Wang et al., 2020; Zhang et al., 2015; Chen et al., 2021; Shugar et al., 2020; Gardelle et al., 2011). My motivation was to obtain a consistent, high-resolution (both spatially and temporally) pattern of glacial lakes in this region and to see a thorough comparison of HOW and, more importantly, WHY this study performs in comparison to previous mapping efforts. Given the known challenges of mapping glacial lakes in a region where clouds, shadows, snow, and ice often obscure the view of glacial lakes, I also expected a major methodological advance.
Indeed, the authors have done a tremendous job in mapping glacial lakes in this region, which I greatly acknowledge. The largest number and size of glacial lakes is also a newsworthy result, and the figures can largely be used to illustrate the regional pattern of glacial lakes. However, to make an original and novel contribution, this study needs more justification and discussion of why it is different from all previous studies. From the current structure, it remains unclear why this study represents a major advance in either the technical processing of satellite imagery or the physical understanding of glacial lakes on the Tibetan Plateau. The authors do cite some previous studies dealing with lake mapping. However, given the differences in temporal and spatial extent, minimum mapping units, distance to different glacier inventories, mapping uncertainties, time periods studied, aggregated time intervals, etc., it remains difficult for the reader to say why this inventory is a "must read" or a "must have" for future studies. I will take the liberty of explaining some of these points in more detail. For example, regarding
- The minimum mapping unit: This is a known issue particularly for lakes at the lower size-distribution. Mixed spectral signatures can cause a lake that persists throughout the study period to fall either within or outside the threshold chosen in this study (81,000 m²). Nie et al. (2017, p.10) used the same threshold, and report that “other research selected 0.0001 km2 (Salerno et al.,2012), 0.0027 km2 (Zhang et al., 2015), 0.0036 km2 (Gardelle et al., 2011) or 0.0045 km2 (Li and Sheng, 2012) as the minimum mapping unit. Our result indicates that 8.1% of glacial lakes belonged to the size class 0.0081–0.01 km2, which only took up 0.79% of the total area. It is obvious that the minimum mapping unit has a significant effect on the total number of glacial lakes, however it affects the total area only slightly.” I thus wonder how large this effect is, even when comparing this study with that of Chen et al (2021) and Wang et al. (2020) who used similar mapping units. Figure 12 is interesting in this regard, as it suggests that this study on average reports more lake area of a given size than Wang et al. and Chen et al. However, dots above the diagonal line suggest those studies also report a number of cases that have more lake area than this study, and I wonder why? A more detailed assessment of the reasons behind these differences could add a convincing point to readers why to choose the presented dataset from now on.
- Aggregation: what is the effect of digitizing lakes only from one image in a given year against an aggregate of images over an entire decade? What is the effect of consistently using images from one month against aggregating over a range of month in a given year? In this regard, the authors note that “During this period [July to November], the coverage of snow and ice is minimal, while the area of the glacial lake usually reaches its maximum, which does not change much due to factors such as glacier supply and precipitation”. Others, however, do find that seasonality matters for the case of supraglacial lakes (Miles et al., 2017).
- Methods: The processing chain for using NDWI thresholds in optical imagery is well established but has its known drawbacks, e.g., potential confusion of water with mountain or cloud shadows. Other studies have recently experimented with satellite missions with higher temporal repeat rates (Wu et al., 2020), radar data (Wangchuk et al., 2022), and image segmentation (Qayyum et al., 2020). I am aware that many resources such as Sentinel-1 data are not available for older time periods in the record. However, is there possibly potential for using the current high-resolution, high-repetition-rate data to improve our lake abundance models for earlier decades for which we only have Landsat imagery?
- Classification of lake types: Apart from the supraglacial lake class, I find it difficult to assess the value of classes such as proglacial, ice-marginal, or unconnected lakes. What do we learn when a glacier is "unconnected" to its parent glacier in terms of its vulnerability or its use as a freshwater resource? Many researchers using this dataset would probably be more interested in a robust assessment of dam type. That is, whether a lake is impounded by a moraine or a glacier, or whether it is located in a rocky depression, cirque, or on a glacier. The study by Lesi et al. (2022), which is currently under review at ESSD, goes an important step forward and classifies lake types according to the formation mechanism of glacier lakes and dam material properties. This could be a strong contribution from this study, if this is accomplished for the entire study region.
In summary, I think it would probably be more useful to compare this study to previous studies rather than just presenting another lake inventory for the Tibetan Plateau and adjacent mountain ranges, as nice as it is. Instead, the authors might consider summarizing the lake outlines from all the previous studies in some sort of review paper. Such a paper could help show how consistent the frequency, size, and changes in glacial lakes are in light of this new dataset, and point out regions where our knowledge is still uncertain. Given these criticisms and opportunities for improvement, I am concerned whether Earth System Science Data is the most appropriate journal for this study.
In the following, I list more detailed line-by-line comments:
L8: “As the Third Pole of the Earth and the Water Tower of Asia”: please stay objective in highlighting the relevance of this region in the abstract. Physically speaking, there is now “Third Pole” on Earth, and the role of a “Water Tower” might not equivalently strong in all regions of the Tibetan Plateau.
L8: I am unsure whether “Tibetan Plateau” is the most suitable term for this region, as the glacier lakes that are investigated in this study are largely located in the mountain ranges fringing the TP, if I am not mistaken.
L12-14: This sentence needs to state how many time slices have been created in this study.
L15: “different regions of TP exhibited varying change rates in glacial lake size”: ambiguous, please be more precise.
L16: “because of reduced rainfall rates”: do the authors show this in this study?
L20: “Third Pole” instead of “third pole”, yet suggest to remove this term entirely from this manuscript.
L22: “the most significant number and area of glaciers outside polar regions”: please be more precise. Also, it depends which regions are classified as 'polar'. Alaska has more ice the High Mountain Asia.
L26-27: “glacier landmass”: unclear, please revise.
L31: “hidden dangers”: please stay objective.
L33: “extremely important”: please avoid subjective qualifiers and quantify instead, why the role is so important.
L67: The minimum mapping unit is an important consideration, but also a weak motivation for another study, assuming that those previous studies remained consistent in their use of a minimum mapping unit. This introduction, and this section in particular, call for a much stronger motivation for this analysis.
L74-79: Instead of describing the workflow of this study, the introduction could rather end with a key research question.
L77-78: “This study mapped the glacial lakes in TP to the maximum”: unclear.
L81: “Roof of the World”: please stay objective. Suggest deleting.
L90: “many countries”: how many?
L93: “~1900s”: given the rest of the sentence, it’s rather the 1930? Furthermore, climate data are not assessed in the rest of the manuscript. Suggest tone down the effects of atmospheric warming / precipitation changes in this manuscript?
L96: Is this “wetting trend” consistent in the entire study region?
L100: Figure 1: Suggest moving the inset to the main map.
L116-117: “which does not change much”: contradicts previous part of the sentence?
L126-127: What is the effect of this thresholds on lakes adjacent to glaciers with steep tongues that melted since the generation of ALOS DEM?
L166-167: Why the reference to Alaska, and why talking about the distribution in the TP in the methods section?
L168-170: “maybe not”: unclear.
L182: “topography and location”: ambiguous, please be more precise.
L184: “applied” instead of “applicable.
L188: Where is the uncertainty in the parameters that were estimated from data that the authors have mentioned before?
L211: style: report the mean first, then the min and max.
L213: yes, that's what the formula implies, given that the uncertainty is inversely proportional to the size of the lake. What does this tell relative measure of error tell us?
L216: Figure 4: What is the purpose of the normal curve? It is not mentioned in the text. In left plot (suggest using labels a and b), dots overlap and don’t allow for a meaningful representation of mapping uncertainty.
L225: how “slow”?
L226-227: “The increase of glacial lake number at higher elevations”: I can’t see this in this manuscript. “ultra-small”: which size class is this?
L230: “a relatively consistent trend with the increase of altitude”: not sure what this means. Please rephrase.
L232: “are” instead of “account”.
L235: Figure 5: suggest avoiding a second y-axis, given that the scale of the two axis differ. Why are plots b and c in 3D? They partly overlap, especially in the tails that could be important to highlight changes in glacier lake elevation. Also, please list all abbreviations in the caption (PGL, UGL, etc.). This critique applies to all plot in the following.
L247: How “significantly”?
L252: “and selected typical glacial lakes expanded or contracted as examples”. Unclear, please rephrase.
L253: “variation trend”: unclear, please rephrase.
L255: “did not provide an in-depth analysis”: so, do the authors provide a more detailed analysis? I fear no.
L257: “various”: four?
L259-260: Content of this sentence is largely subjective and speculative. Suggest deleting.
L261: “is” instead of “was”.
L274: Legend of Figure 10: “Area change rate”: is it %? Meters? Temporal reference period? Also, the color stretch is wrong, as it suggests that the value range from -1 to 0 is the same as for 0 to 7.8
L277-283: Suggest deleting the chapter on lake volumes, given that the volumes are a simple conversion of area and are not at the heart of this paper. This chapter also adds hardly any novel insights compared to the previous estimates on lake areas.
L281: “which confirmed a frequency increase of GLOFs in the Himalayan region”: NO, this is exactly opposite to what some of these studies have found.
L305: so, this study is a lumped sum over a longer period. Could this explain the higher abundance / area compared to previous studies?
L316: “Considering the difference in time coverage of the three datasets”: Not sure how useful this comparison is then?
L319: Not the 1° x 1° grids anymore? Why this resolution?
L326: Figure 12: Add years of publication to y-axis. Why not add a 1:1 line to the plot? It is important to mention that the trend is smaller than 1, hence the authors observe more lake area on average than previous studies. Figure caption needs to mention that the data have been aggregated on a grid.
As a non-native speaker, I can't fully judge the quality of the language, but I think this manuscript also deserved to be improved by a native speaker.
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Xuanmei Fan, 25 Mar 2022
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://essd.copernicus.org/preprints/essd-2021-354/essd-2021-354-AC2-supplement.pdf
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RC1: 'Comment on essd-2021-354', Anonymous Referee #1, 19 Jan 2022
The authors provided a detailed inventory from a large area for a long-time span. Nevertheless, the similarity to the paper Wang et al. (2020) is too high. They discuss the differences/similarities in the chapter Discussion, this is fair. They also applied more accurate data, but according to the comparison with the paper Wang et al. (2020) they did not get significant difference. The paper is well written, appropriate structure, but they just choose wrong topic. The time difference is too close to the previous paper and climate change can not be seen in the results. If I simplify it little bit, they just confirmed that the study from Wang et al. was well elaborated.
The main task for my review was to compare similarities with other papers from this region. I did not provide a standard review, nevertheless one comment I must stress here. What I see as disadvantages of this paper is the limit for “glacial lake” 10 km from a glacier. The wrong idea behind this limit is that “glacial lake” is “glacial” because of its origin (from the glacial action - glacial erosion of valley or glacial accumulation - moraine). It means that he essence of the term is in the origin of the lake, nothing to do with the distance from glacier, source of water in the lake etc.
My suggestion for rejection is mainly because of the wrong selection of the topic. In this version it is hard to identify any novelty and originality, unfortunately. One solution for future will be to incorporate all glacial lakes into the inventory (as they promised in the title, by the way). The other possibility I see in comparison of different methods of RS inventory, that they can specify the accuracy on the example of the inventory. Other possibility will be wait for significant time difference, that the climate change could be identified.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-2021-354-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Xuanmei Fan, 29 Jan 2022
Dear reviewer,
Thank you for reviewing our manuscript. We carefully re-evaluate the novelty and originality of our study, especially by comparing with other published studies, i.e. Wang et al. (2020). Actually, novelty of a study is always the first and the most important thing to evaluate before conducting any research. The overall objective of our research project is to reveal the spatio-temporal evolution of glaciers and glacial lakes in Tibetan Plateau and their response to climate change. We intended to use other published glacial lake inventories, but we found that there is a lack of high-resolution multi-temporal inventory of glacial lakes covering the whole Tibetan Plateau after through literature review. There are some inventories have high temporal resolution but only covers small regions, while some other inventories covering larger area of Tibetan Plateau but only from one or two periods (i.e. Wang et al., 2020), see the Introduction and Discussion (5.1 Comparison with other glacial lake datasets) for details. This gap motivates us to spend more than one year to collect data and develop methods to create a new inventory, which we believe is more complete, accurate and higher temporal resolution (covering three periods for the whole Tibetan Plateau).
We provide more evidences and responses to your concerns as follows. We hope you can recheck our study.
Thank you again for reviewing the manuscript.
Best regards,
Xuanmei Fan on behalf of all coauthors
Deputy director of State Key Laboratory of Geohazard Prevention and Geoenvironment Protection, Chengdu University of Technology
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Xuanmei Fan, 29 Jan 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on essd-2021-354', Anonymous Referee #2, 15 Feb 2022
Dear editors,
dear authors,
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review the manuscript essd-2021-354 "Spatio-temporal evolution of glacial lakes in the Tibetan Plateau over the past 30 years" by Dou and co-authors. In this study, Dou et al. mapped glacial lakes on the Tibetan Plateau at three time steps between 1990 and 2019. The authors accessed Landsat time series via the Google Earth Engine, which they fed into a processing chain that included thresholds for band indices and manual post-processing. The authors found the largest number and area of glacial lakes reported to date for the Tibetan Plateau. In the discussion, they offer reasons that might explain these differences between previous studies and suggest possible areas of application of this data set.
I was interested in reading this manuscript, especially given the large number of glacial lake inventories at the regional scale that appeared in the last decade (Zheng et al., 2021; Nie, 2017; Wang et al., 2020; Zhang et al., 2015; Chen et al., 2021; Shugar et al., 2020; Gardelle et al., 2011). My motivation was to obtain a consistent, high-resolution (both spatially and temporally) pattern of glacial lakes in this region and to see a thorough comparison of HOW and, more importantly, WHY this study performs in comparison to previous mapping efforts. Given the known challenges of mapping glacial lakes in a region where clouds, shadows, snow, and ice often obscure the view of glacial lakes, I also expected a major methodological advance.
Indeed, the authors have done a tremendous job in mapping glacial lakes in this region, which I greatly acknowledge. The largest number and size of glacial lakes is also a newsworthy result, and the figures can largely be used to illustrate the regional pattern of glacial lakes. However, to make an original and novel contribution, this study needs more justification and discussion of why it is different from all previous studies. From the current structure, it remains unclear why this study represents a major advance in either the technical processing of satellite imagery or the physical understanding of glacial lakes on the Tibetan Plateau. The authors do cite some previous studies dealing with lake mapping. However, given the differences in temporal and spatial extent, minimum mapping units, distance to different glacier inventories, mapping uncertainties, time periods studied, aggregated time intervals, etc., it remains difficult for the reader to say why this inventory is a "must read" or a "must have" for future studies. I will take the liberty of explaining some of these points in more detail. For example, regarding
- The minimum mapping unit: This is a known issue particularly for lakes at the lower size-distribution. Mixed spectral signatures can cause a lake that persists throughout the study period to fall either within or outside the threshold chosen in this study (81,000 m²). Nie et al. (2017, p.10) used the same threshold, and report that “other research selected 0.0001 km2 (Salerno et al.,2012), 0.0027 km2 (Zhang et al., 2015), 0.0036 km2 (Gardelle et al., 2011) or 0.0045 km2 (Li and Sheng, 2012) as the minimum mapping unit. Our result indicates that 8.1% of glacial lakes belonged to the size class 0.0081–0.01 km2, which only took up 0.79% of the total area. It is obvious that the minimum mapping unit has a significant effect on the total number of glacial lakes, however it affects the total area only slightly.” I thus wonder how large this effect is, even when comparing this study with that of Chen et al (2021) and Wang et al. (2020) who used similar mapping units. Figure 12 is interesting in this regard, as it suggests that this study on average reports more lake area of a given size than Wang et al. and Chen et al. However, dots above the diagonal line suggest those studies also report a number of cases that have more lake area than this study, and I wonder why? A more detailed assessment of the reasons behind these differences could add a convincing point to readers why to choose the presented dataset from now on.
- Aggregation: what is the effect of digitizing lakes only from one image in a given year against an aggregate of images over an entire decade? What is the effect of consistently using images from one month against aggregating over a range of month in a given year? In this regard, the authors note that “During this period [July to November], the coverage of snow and ice is minimal, while the area of the glacial lake usually reaches its maximum, which does not change much due to factors such as glacier supply and precipitation”. Others, however, do find that seasonality matters for the case of supraglacial lakes (Miles et al., 2017).
- Methods: The processing chain for using NDWI thresholds in optical imagery is well established but has its known drawbacks, e.g., potential confusion of water with mountain or cloud shadows. Other studies have recently experimented with satellite missions with higher temporal repeat rates (Wu et al., 2020), radar data (Wangchuk et al., 2022), and image segmentation (Qayyum et al., 2020). I am aware that many resources such as Sentinel-1 data are not available for older time periods in the record. However, is there possibly potential for using the current high-resolution, high-repetition-rate data to improve our lake abundance models for earlier decades for which we only have Landsat imagery?
- Classification of lake types: Apart from the supraglacial lake class, I find it difficult to assess the value of classes such as proglacial, ice-marginal, or unconnected lakes. What do we learn when a glacier is "unconnected" to its parent glacier in terms of its vulnerability or its use as a freshwater resource? Many researchers using this dataset would probably be more interested in a robust assessment of dam type. That is, whether a lake is impounded by a moraine or a glacier, or whether it is located in a rocky depression, cirque, or on a glacier. The study by Lesi et al. (2022), which is currently under review at ESSD, goes an important step forward and classifies lake types according to the formation mechanism of glacier lakes and dam material properties. This could be a strong contribution from this study, if this is accomplished for the entire study region.
In summary, I think it would probably be more useful to compare this study to previous studies rather than just presenting another lake inventory for the Tibetan Plateau and adjacent mountain ranges, as nice as it is. Instead, the authors might consider summarizing the lake outlines from all the previous studies in some sort of review paper. Such a paper could help show how consistent the frequency, size, and changes in glacial lakes are in light of this new dataset, and point out regions where our knowledge is still uncertain. Given these criticisms and opportunities for improvement, I am concerned whether Earth System Science Data is the most appropriate journal for this study.
In the following, I list more detailed line-by-line comments:
L8: “As the Third Pole of the Earth and the Water Tower of Asia”: please stay objective in highlighting the relevance of this region in the abstract. Physically speaking, there is now “Third Pole” on Earth, and the role of a “Water Tower” might not equivalently strong in all regions of the Tibetan Plateau.
L8: I am unsure whether “Tibetan Plateau” is the most suitable term for this region, as the glacier lakes that are investigated in this study are largely located in the mountain ranges fringing the TP, if I am not mistaken.
L12-14: This sentence needs to state how many time slices have been created in this study.
L15: “different regions of TP exhibited varying change rates in glacial lake size”: ambiguous, please be more precise.
L16: “because of reduced rainfall rates”: do the authors show this in this study?
L20: “Third Pole” instead of “third pole”, yet suggest to remove this term entirely from this manuscript.
L22: “the most significant number and area of glaciers outside polar regions”: please be more precise. Also, it depends which regions are classified as 'polar'. Alaska has more ice the High Mountain Asia.
L26-27: “glacier landmass”: unclear, please revise.
L31: “hidden dangers”: please stay objective.
L33: “extremely important”: please avoid subjective qualifiers and quantify instead, why the role is so important.
L67: The minimum mapping unit is an important consideration, but also a weak motivation for another study, assuming that those previous studies remained consistent in their use of a minimum mapping unit. This introduction, and this section in particular, call for a much stronger motivation for this analysis.
L74-79: Instead of describing the workflow of this study, the introduction could rather end with a key research question.
L77-78: “This study mapped the glacial lakes in TP to the maximum”: unclear.
L81: “Roof of the World”: please stay objective. Suggest deleting.
L90: “many countries”: how many?
L93: “~1900s”: given the rest of the sentence, it’s rather the 1930? Furthermore, climate data are not assessed in the rest of the manuscript. Suggest tone down the effects of atmospheric warming / precipitation changes in this manuscript?
L96: Is this “wetting trend” consistent in the entire study region?
L100: Figure 1: Suggest moving the inset to the main map.
L116-117: “which does not change much”: contradicts previous part of the sentence?
L126-127: What is the effect of this thresholds on lakes adjacent to glaciers with steep tongues that melted since the generation of ALOS DEM?
L166-167: Why the reference to Alaska, and why talking about the distribution in the TP in the methods section?
L168-170: “maybe not”: unclear.
L182: “topography and location”: ambiguous, please be more precise.
L184: “applied” instead of “applicable.
L188: Where is the uncertainty in the parameters that were estimated from data that the authors have mentioned before?
L211: style: report the mean first, then the min and max.
L213: yes, that's what the formula implies, given that the uncertainty is inversely proportional to the size of the lake. What does this tell relative measure of error tell us?
L216: Figure 4: What is the purpose of the normal curve? It is not mentioned in the text. In left plot (suggest using labels a and b), dots overlap and don’t allow for a meaningful representation of mapping uncertainty.
L225: how “slow”?
L226-227: “The increase of glacial lake number at higher elevations”: I can’t see this in this manuscript. “ultra-small”: which size class is this?
L230: “a relatively consistent trend with the increase of altitude”: not sure what this means. Please rephrase.
L232: “are” instead of “account”.
L235: Figure 5: suggest avoiding a second y-axis, given that the scale of the two axis differ. Why are plots b and c in 3D? They partly overlap, especially in the tails that could be important to highlight changes in glacier lake elevation. Also, please list all abbreviations in the caption (PGL, UGL, etc.). This critique applies to all plot in the following.
L247: How “significantly”?
L252: “and selected typical glacial lakes expanded or contracted as examples”. Unclear, please rephrase.
L253: “variation trend”: unclear, please rephrase.
L255: “did not provide an in-depth analysis”: so, do the authors provide a more detailed analysis? I fear no.
L257: “various”: four?
L259-260: Content of this sentence is largely subjective and speculative. Suggest deleting.
L261: “is” instead of “was”.
L274: Legend of Figure 10: “Area change rate”: is it %? Meters? Temporal reference period? Also, the color stretch is wrong, as it suggests that the value range from -1 to 0 is the same as for 0 to 7.8
L277-283: Suggest deleting the chapter on lake volumes, given that the volumes are a simple conversion of area and are not at the heart of this paper. This chapter also adds hardly any novel insights compared to the previous estimates on lake areas.
L281: “which confirmed a frequency increase of GLOFs in the Himalayan region”: NO, this is exactly opposite to what some of these studies have found.
L305: so, this study is a lumped sum over a longer period. Could this explain the higher abundance / area compared to previous studies?
L316: “Considering the difference in time coverage of the three datasets”: Not sure how useful this comparison is then?
L319: Not the 1° x 1° grids anymore? Why this resolution?
L326: Figure 12: Add years of publication to y-axis. Why not add a 1:1 line to the plot? It is important to mention that the trend is smaller than 1, hence the authors observe more lake area on average than previous studies. Figure caption needs to mention that the data have been aggregated on a grid.
As a non-native speaker, I can't fully judge the quality of the language, but I think this manuscript also deserved to be improved by a native speaker.
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Data sets
Dou, X., Fan, X., Yunus, A. P., Xiong, J., Tang, R., Wang, X., and Xu, Q. Spatio-temporal glacial lakes dataset in the Tibetan Plateau: 1990–2019 (TPGL) https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.5574289
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